Poems Writings & Reflections
Pearl Ketover Prilik
I read the poem before the title - then I had a great urge to edit it to read'No second thoughts playround the child in leafed-mud sprawl.Death, not Spring, awakes.'Do hope you don't mind my sharing this thought? You created such a strong image in my mind...
Oh Jinksy.....not only don't I mind I am delighted....actually people over at Poetic Asides where i' 've been submitting almost exclusively for last few years came to know " Kaitlin" very well... If you ' re interested click on the Kaitlin series...would love to know your thoughts! Actually " Kaitlin" appeared and found her way into a novel I wrote in November for NaNoWriMo challenge I DO like your edit! Thanks again for visiting, reading and taking enough interest to offer an edit!