tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post8071507277617648531..comments2024-03-28T18:04:58.688-07:00Comments on Imagine: DAY 21 - PA PROMPT "SECOND THOUGHTS " - POEM 2. - On Kaitlin - Murdered-Four-Year-OldDr. Pearl Ketover Prilik (PKP)http://www.blogger.com/profile/15506538737806033824noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-27080057902591742632011-04-22T16:03:46.768-07:002011-04-22T16:03:46.768-07:00Oh Jinksy.....not only don't I mind I am delig...Oh Jinksy.....not only don't I mind I am delighted....actually people over at Poetic Asides where i' 've been submitting almost exclusively for last few years came to know " Kaitlin" very well... If you ' re interested click on the Kaitlin series...would love to know your thoughts! Actually " Kaitlin" appeared and found her way into a novel I wrote in November for NaNoWriMo challenge <br /><br /><br />I DO like your edit! Thanks again for visiting, reading and taking enough interest to offer an edit!Dr. Pearl Ketover Prilik (PKP)https://www.blogger.com/profile/15506538737806033824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-49447531626327672552011-04-22T14:13:35.766-07:002011-04-22T14:13:35.766-07:00I read the poem before the title - then I had a gr...I read the poem before the title - then I had a great urge to edit it to read<br /><br />'No second thoughts play<br />round the child in leafed-mud sprawl.<br />Death, not Spring, awakes.'<br /><br />Do hope you don't mind my sharing this thought? You created such a strong image in my mind...Jinksyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01686101468214361004noreply@blogger.com