The Inevitable Creep of the Tide
There on the shore my father and I
sea breezed blown
he tanned and black haired
waiting at a sanded mound
I ferrying Fantasia's beach
buckets of seawater
He drizzling into magical
being a castle three quarters tall as I
All afternoon we worked
Sun lowering in the sky,
people walking by
stopping to look to smile
a trio of tow-headed
siblings watching thumbs in mouths
dumbfounded until they called away
Finally sand golden sun setting
He drizzled wet sand through his hands
squeezing a draped doorway into life
a small fuchsia flag posted and waving
in the salty air
I watched my father, my castle
and the sudden unnoticed inexorable
creep of the tide lapping at its sides.
Leaned against him inhaling cigarettes,
Coppertone, salt, a touch of turpentine.
We bought creamsicles from the man who came
around one last time lugging a huge steel cooler -
And then we were alone …in the glow of orange light
The sweet tangy taste of citrus and cream
on my lips as the gentle tide turned –
rose and pushed waves closer - inch by inch
until in a sudden lurch of powerful spray
All that remained of my castle
was a tiny fuchsia flag
floating out to sea.
My father’s arm stayed solid around my shoulders
Dedicated to my father Lawrence R. Ketover
Beautiful poem: evocative and tender! So proud of the honor bestowed on you! So well-deserved! In the universe of souls, your father is celebrating you! 🥰
ReplyDeleteAmazing. This took me back to being on the jersey shore beaches with my father. I could relate to every moment!! Priceless memories!!
ReplyDeleteAn award-winning Poem! ~:-)
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