Monday, April 25, 2011

DAY 25-PA PROMPT FALLING -POEM 7. The Falling

Tossing as a filly
Pawing at the gate
She throws her mane
In his direction
Mindful of the hairpins
Pulling her sacrificial scalp
Posted by Dr. Pearl Ketover Prilik (PKP) at 8:42 PM

4 comments:

  1. Judy RoneyApril 26, 2011 at 6:12 AM

    I love this simply for the richness in words and combos. Comparing her main to that of a horse is very affective.

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  2. MaryApril 26, 2011 at 6:13 AM

    Pearl, the ending was really a surprise!

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  3. Dr. Pearl Ketover Prilik (PKP)April 26, 2011 at 9:01 AM

    Thank you Judy...what young women go though is a " falling" in itself....never realizing in the moment their win natural powers of attraction!

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  4. Dr. Pearl Ketover Prilik (PKP)April 26, 2011 at 9:03 AM

    Thanks. Judy... Just a little fun.... Happy that you were surprised....! :)

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