Weekend in the country
with cat and bird -
She woke to a cat
curled on a plump corner chair.
Sunlight spilling on
vased flowers - in those un-askew moments
waking in the
guesthouse – she smiled - the cat opened
one eye and then
another – in steady emerald stare -stretching
in that languid feline
way – in feigned innocence of the unhappy crimson pull of dawn’s nightmare
furry sanguinary fury –
She turned, poor-still
happy-hapless- house-guest,
suddenly startled by
the silence of her sweet songbird –
turned to the pretty
cage carried along with her –
Its door now curiously
opened –
its tiny occupant
unrecognizable
but for that precious
puff
of yellow feathers
stirring
in the breeze
from her hosts’
open window carrying
her
soft scream into the
now
mourning-morning
mourning-morning
Sadly felines make their own rules. How curiously enticing was the way you used the words with a clipped cruelty all of their own.
ReplyDeleteI agree: There is a "clipped cruelty" here, and we the readers are clipped right along with it.
DeleteOh yes, innocent-seeming kittens have their own ideas about the fate of birds, don't they? It is indeed a natural instinct, but somewhat off-putting all the same...good poem.
ReplyDeleteWhat a wonderful story poem...like a fable...i love the colours and the imagery and the apparent laziness under which lies the motions of the world..
ReplyDeleteOh dear. The cat will just act like nothing is wrong and all is fine in the world. I feel sorry for the owner of the songbird.
ReplyDeleteVery much enjoyed reading this -- very nice imagery in this one, enough to picture the scene and mood, which turned from peaceful to a not-so-nice discovery. :D
what an abrupt change!! cats will be cats...sigh...a lovely poem
ReplyDeleteThis poem really 'grabs' me, Pearl. You have set the scene & carried it out. I can just see that cat's innocent look & feel the sadness the hosts must feel when they realize their precious songbird is gone.
ReplyDeleteOh - the cat's nature is its own.. So sad when all is changing.. Reminds me of the fable of the scorpion and the frog,
ReplyDeleteA complete surprise but very well plotted.
ReplyDeleteSuch a lovely fable of a poem... :D
ReplyDeleteLoved the vivid imagery and tone!
xoxo
Well penned... I hope you weren't the beautiful bird :-(
ReplyDeleteZQ
lovely images.. watching cats is some sort of meditation :)
ReplyDeleteI was drifting along so beautifully, till the ending.....such is life, and you have captured it so perfectly!
ReplyDeleteOh my goodness, you painted such a peaceful scene, until suddenly... And then you painted that one with telling restraint. Beautifully written, Pearl.
ReplyDeleteThere is absolutely nothing better than waking, "to a cat curled on a plump corner chair."
ReplyDeleteOh no...I feel for the poor caged bird...
ReplyDeleteO oh... though maybe it's as nature intended.
ReplyDeleteit was a beautiful tragedy - the way your words flow.. how to story unfolds.
ReplyDeleteOh dear! But an excellent use for the wordle words to make this poem.
ReplyDeleteAh, it's heart breaking...
ReplyDeleteSylvester caught Tweety.
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