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Saturday, April 16, 2011

DAY 16 - PA Prompt Snapshot - Poem 2 - Graduation Day

Graduation Day

Black hair
Flopped on forehead
Flannel faded soft shirt
ripped 
Over thin
jeans outlining
Maleness
Ropy veins
On the back of
Big hands
One on the base 
Of her spine  
Massaging, hidden
The other hanging open
Heavily on her graduation
White sun-dressed shoulder
Smirking, possessively  for
Her daddy's camera

5 comments:

  1. What a clear, lovely, and warm picture

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  2. Pearl Girl, I would give anything to see this snapshot! What an evocative description! Nice answer to the prompt. Amy
    http://sharplittlepencil.wordpress.com/2011/04/17/mmmmmmmms-abc-day-16/

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  3. Glad you liked Ames, this was a snapshot that exists only in a created interior album titled "What Could Have Been"...

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