The City That Never Sleeps
Sometimes in the depth of night,
I swear on all sacred, an apparition
soars in the lyric limbo between all
that was and what is still to be - -
There - in shining
sinuous streets
whispers a chant, a magic moment
where the spirit of nigh three thousand
gather, and catch one by the wrists - -
To bear witness
as, for an instant the gaudy, garish,
ghoulish tumble of shredded papers
spins as inchoate confetti of that bright
September morn whirling the heinous -
mystic maelstrom, each to melt into slivers
of shimmer, delicate and irrevocably shattered
as a single porcelain angel falling farther than
one hundred floors – from sparkling shimmers
rises a drawn breath exhaled in tinkled peals as
pure as a newborn infant coalesced into a collective
chorus distilled to a single singing soul –
as this apparition rises in celestial song to illuminate
the night – of the city that never sleeps–floating above
in opened armed embrace - before with a smoky sigh
filamented tender arms reach deeply into the moonlit sky
and
vanish
Oh Pearl...this is brilliant...it brought tears to my eyes, a lump to my throat and snatched my breath clean away...re-reading for the third time now...I hope you can get this one published.
ReplyDeleteAwww Sharon - I am humbled by your comment - So very very deeply appreciated. Perhaps I will send this one out to fly :)
DeleteSo beautiful - a maelstrom of words magically woven.
ReplyDeleteThank you so very much Viv - that word malestrom just wouldn't be left out of this poem :)
DeleteYou paint quite a picture.
ReplyDeleteThank you JCN - It is a paint-by-number appearing and transferred to type :)
DeleteThis takes my breath away, Pearl. Brilliant images here. A poem I FEEL.
ReplyDeleteOh Mary - what a fantastic comment - I am beyond delighted that you so enjoyed :)
DeleteA nation has a coming of age moment sometimes on a foreign field and sometimes at home. Strangely many from other nations thought that the US joined their number on that day.
ReplyDeleteYes, I do agree... I also personally believe that we might very well have squandered a marvelous opportunity of a moment of global good-will - but everything for a reason... yes we were rudely awoken from our previous innocence on that still-unbelievable morning
DeleteSometimes you need to reach up into the heavens to rest and draw breath..such a rapid flow of images and feelings..
ReplyDeleteThank you so very much JR - your comment is poetry :)
DeleteWonderfully written, as ALWAYS!!
ReplyDeleteHis Misky - Oh what can I say to such a delicious comment - but thank you with all my heart! (and yes your comment is here - I had comment moderation on and it didn't pop up immediately - ).
DeleteNot sure where my comment went, Pearl, but I loved this.
ReplyDeletesuch intensity here... packed with motion
ReplyDeleteThank you for stopping and taking the time to comment - so very much appreciated :)
DeleteBeautifully crafted poem.
ReplyDeleteThank you for stopping and reading and taking the time to leave such a wonderful comment. :)
DeleteI like the idea of a lyric limbo, great description throughout. Nicely done.
ReplyDeleteDanny - thank you so very much for stopping, reading and commenting - happy you enjoyed that idea of a lyric limbo :)
Delete"inchoate confetti" takes me by surprise! ;)
ReplyDeleteConvoluted Whirl
Hi Magic- took me by surprise too - so much so that I double checked the meaning to be sure it was what I was really saying!
DeleteOh my :) ... Thank you for these beautiful comments - I will be back on-line later in the day to respond individually - and to read and comment on other poets ...Thank you once again - each and all are so very deeply appreciated
ReplyDeleteGood to hear you will be visiting other poets from the pantry as well...as we all do enjoy visits to our blogs.
DeleteVery nice piece...
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Thank you so very much for taking the time to comment - Very much appreciated :)
DeleteBeautiful writing about such a dreadful day. You made the most horrible sacred.
ReplyDeleteAw Evi - what a wonderful thing to say - I am humbled :)
DeleteWhat an astonishing poem this is. I cant think of New York without remembering that day - I love your line "a collective
ReplyDeletechorus distilled to a single singing soul –" and love the idea of the souls flying about in that area at night in that city that never sleeps. A wonderful poem!
Sherry - I had some trouble trying to write a "city" poem and found it impossible to ignore this image that came together - thank you so very much - I am delighted that you enjoyed the spirit of the poem. What more can I say - but thank you - if I could reach through the screen and give you a hug I would :)
DeleteThis is a hauntingly beautiful tribute to those lost that terrible day. Thank you for sharing it.
ReplyDeleteA most special memorial that should be widely shared - to bring comfort to those trying to find ways to live with an immense loss. Reminds me of Genesis: "...and the Spirit of God was moving over the surface of the waters..."
ReplyDeleteOh my goodness - what an incredible comment - Nurit- I am humbled- Thank you -
DeleteI teared up as I read this, Pearl. Your words honor the city and its souls.
ReplyDeleteOh my Brenda - your tears honor these words that come to me from where I often do not know - I do know that the words that come to me from you are often mightily inspiring :) Thank you
DeleteThis, surely, has beauty i'd love to reminisce again & again. Bookmark worthy! smiles.
ReplyDeleteThank you so very much. Delighted that you stopped by to read and enjoyed. Hope to see you again. Your lovely comment is most deeply appreciated ;)
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