Sunday, January 29, 2012

in the Field of Anguish











in the Field of Anguish

In the Field of Anguish a young round bellied girl-woman walks without volition
stumbling, soft bare feet tremble on damp earth, volcanic shocks surround, in
inescapable embrace, rising deep within,  a single purposed  searing spark
flares,  in a conflagration of womb filled  flame. Her hard held frozen serenity
surrenders into panicked run as all boundaries known  shimmer permeable,
surreal,  and at the precipice of crescendoed inescapable consequence fall - as
she slides through the sodden scream soaked  field of Anguish into the silent
gentle sun slanted Meadow of Bliss - sweet velvet grass cradling new life, each
sense focused in this peace stilled moment silent but for that solitary sparkled
cascading cerulean cry of fresh life born from the now forgotten 
Field of Anguish.     

28 comments:

  1. It sounds as if you've described a panic attack.
    Very vivid imagery. Lovely.

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  2. I'm all for the Meadow of Bliss. An exciting write.

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  3. I felt the tension, just reading this piece. Pearl, you are astonishing (and write astonishingly too) - but as Viv says, I'm all for a Meadow of Bliss, too. ☼

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    1. Ooooh thank you so very much... you astonish me with such comments :)

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  4. From the field of anguish to the meadow of bliss... great image, Pearl!

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  5. I definitely feel the anguish. And "fresh life born of the now forgotten" is cool!

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  6. It rises to an anguished crescendo and then softly releases with a gentle bliss...birth! love it!

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  7. This is powerful writing.....one feels the crescendo of pain, and then the relief of the grassy meadow and the cry of new life.

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  8. Thank you Cheryl...like having a "cool line". Much appreciated!

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  9. Oh my Janet... I'm loving the love! Thank you:)

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  10. Sherry ....much thanks ....much appreciation ....I left a comment on your albatross name poem...great writing...

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  11. Excellent poem with pain and redemption. Love this one, Pearl!

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    1. Awww thank you Brenda.... so very much appreciate and again CONGRATULATIONS ON the debates and a happy birthday all year through!!! You have changed my Sunday mornings with the joy of wordling.... :) Thank you :)

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  12. Pearl, Pearl, Pearl - you have worldled you a fine wordle here! You had me at the title "In the Field of Anguish" - it makes my soul ache - and just kept going; "all boundaries known shimmer permeable, surreal" ... indeed. Very fine.

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