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in the Field of Anguish
In the Field of Anguish a young round bellied girl-woman
walks without volition
stumbling, soft bare feet tremble on damp earth, volcanic
shocks surround, in
inescapable embrace, rising deep within, a single purposed searing spark
flares, in a
conflagration of womb filled flame. Her
hard held frozen serenity
surrenders into panicked run as all boundaries known shimmer permeable,
surreal, and at the
precipice of crescendoed inescapable consequence fall - as
she slides through the sodden scream soaked field of Anguish into the silent
gentle sun slanted Meadow of Bliss - sweet velvet grass
cradling new life, each
sense focused in this peace stilled moment silent but for
that solitary sparkled
cascading cerulean cry of fresh life born from the now
forgotten
Field of Anguish.
It sounds as if you've described a panic attack.
ReplyDeleteVery vivid imagery. Lovely.
Ooh interesting take on the poem.
ReplyDeleteI'm all for the Meadow of Bliss. An exciting write.
ReplyDeleteI felt the tension, just reading this piece. Pearl, you are astonishing (and write astonishingly too) - but as Viv says, I'm all for a Meadow of Bliss, too. ☼
ReplyDeleteOoooh thank you so very much... you astonish me with such comments :)
DeleteFrom the field of anguish to the meadow of bliss... great image, Pearl!
ReplyDeleteI definitely feel the anguish. And "fresh life born of the now forgotten" is cool!
ReplyDeleteIt rises to an anguished crescendo and then softly releases with a gentle bliss...birth! love it!
ReplyDeleteThis is powerful writing.....one feels the crescendo of pain, and then the relief of the grassy meadow and the cry of new life.
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