Under the African sky mindless they toil in trappedsilence All fleeting sparkdrowned in vacant eyes Oblivious of the village down the road of the planet whirling Under the fires of bare feet burning on brilliant as icediamond smolder in blood dark hands
And they do this for such little reward, too. The whole world is in discontent right now and Mother Nature is trying her best to survive our endless ravaging of her too. Thought provoking piece.
somehow I feel badly - as though I opened up a political storm that that I do not have authority on which to speak-this is just where the words fell - thanks for positive comments :)
Strength and vision is your trademark, Pearl. I've giving it a whirl. Tell me if I did this right.
White searing sky fires a spark to smolder Within the skull like a trapped salamander, Mindless of the fleeting silence, drowned by A dull stone, a potential diamond named ice, Oblivious to the stir caused by its lifting From a scorched planet whose breast is gouged, torn.
Hope this can suffice. It's my first verse in weeks.
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And they do this for such little reward, too. The whole world is in discontent right now and Mother Nature is trying her best to survive our endless ravaging of her too. Thought provoking piece.
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ReplyDeleteAnd so it shall be, as long as a market exists.
ReplyDeletesomehow I feel badly - as though I opened up a political storm that that I do not have authority on which to speak-this is just where the words fell - thanks for positive comments :)
ReplyDeleteStrength and vision is your trademark, Pearl. I've giving it a whirl. Tell me if I did this right.
ReplyDeleteWhite searing sky fires a spark to smolder
Within the skull like a trapped salamander,
Mindless of the fleeting silence, drowned by
A dull stone, a potential diamond named ice,
Oblivious to the stir caused by its lifting
From a scorched planet whose breast is gouged, torn.
Hope this can suffice. It's my first verse in weeks.
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Wonderfully vivid and profound. I was trying to find my favorite line and find they are equally favored in my mind. Wow.
ReplyDeleteGreat things you’ve always shared with us. Just keep writing this kind of posts.The time which was wasted in traveling for tuition now it can be used for studies.Thanks pendants
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