Poems Writings & Reflections
Pearl Ketover Prilik
This is so sweetly romantic that I failed to look for those prickly wordle words. Delightful.
Thanks Viv - hope you are on road to feeling well :)))
Hats can define us, so be careful of the one you choose.
Yes Annell or can disguise us .. Thanks for stopping by - appreciate the read!
Oh, I would so love to know what happened in the aftermath of this chance meeting!
I could picture this, and the picture made me smile! An enjoyable write.
Thanks Mary - so happy to prompt a smile :)
This is lovely, Pearl. Your use of the hat provided a strong rhythm to the piece. The image of them chasing their hats made me smile,too. Love it.
I really like a story with vivid characters and details, and a bit of romance and mystery. Your piece has all of that and more. Wonderful wordling,Elizabethhttp://soulsmusic.wordpress.com/2012/12/09/emergence/
I love the serendipity of this poem! I can picture them running for their hats and then, who knows what!
So loving this poem Dr. Prilik. I imagine ee cummings andDr. Suess marrying. Excellent cadence and content. Brava!
Awww your comment has me smiling :)
I like that - a chance meeting, because of hats. I actually met my love through a chance meeting. Alas no hats. But fun to remiss about just the same. I've two to offer this week, visit one or the other or...something else in my blogspot that suits your fancy - As the two I've posted are sort of a darker shade of grey. This post is cheerier:http://julesgemsandstuff.blogspot.com/2012/12/tuesday-tryouts-dec-4-shell-game.html
wow. delightful. I can picture them running pell mell for their hats in the wind. lovely wordle.
Hats off to you :)
I really loved the way it started, described a male and female in the way the bear their hats. Must say it's a pity hats are rare. So much less chances to meet.
As a "hat lady" myself, this tickled me no end ... especially the visuals ... very cool and well-wordled as alwayshttp://thepoet-tree-house.blogspot.ca/2012/12/delicate-sensibilities.html
Love the way you used hats in your poem!
A light-hearted story, perfectly told & fitting in the necessary words!
Delightful and insightful!
How romantic. Lovely write
I could see those hats rolling with the wind, owners in pursuit.