APRIL POETIC ASIDES - POEM-A-DAY DAY 1- ARRIVAL
Green shoot
there after storms
salt watered
soil into uncertainty
there
centered in
browned grass
a single verdant
shoot
stands
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In flagrante delicto
it begins in the belly
a cool chill trembling
in sanctuaries sacred
windows fade to paned
pale-colored glass
it begins in the belly
and moves
lithe fingers
cracking the crisp
dormant chrysalis
until the butterfly
Doubt
flutters
free
soaring in flagrante delicto
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Very nice, Pearl. There's a true Zen element here. Perfect.
ReplyDeleteAw Rich - thanks for stopping I really appreciate your opinion. Welcome back home.
DeleteI enjoyed both poems! "Green Shoot" rolls around so much in my mouth, I can almost taste it. Yes, the image of "salt watered" brings taffy to mind, but there's more to it than that. It keeps pulling me back in. Very nice!
ReplyDeleteAwww thanks Hat :)
DeleteLovely, Pearl. Both have lingering images and sensations, each different, but both strong. Great job.
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