Poems Writings & Reflections
Pearl Ketover Prilik
sad for the mind to be starving, when the body is full :-) I hope I got the message.
Is giving in to temptation always an end to starvation?Starve
Mhmmmm meant to convey feeling of the "starve" when one's mind and mouth are yearning for that which is elusive... Temptation too weak a word ... Good critique thanks!
I would now change first line toTantalization
Good one, especially when I substitute "tantalization." There's a lot of emotion packed into that situation, most of it painful.
This is brilliant - there is more than one kind of starvation.