Poems Writings & Reflections
Pearl Ketover Prilik
Wow, very dramatic! The second line really packs a punch.
Thank you PattiKen :)
What a horrendous death they faced.A tough read.
Aw Happy - Always fascinating what others bring to what we write. I can think of many horrendous deaths that this haiku might evoke - yet they were not in my mind when writing. Thank you for stopping and being moved :)
I live near the ocean and feel the power of the heavy surf in your haiku! It is quite a symphony, Well done!
I'll comment myself later in the week on this one...
I like it, but I'm not sure why...I guess because there's a lot going on and I don't know what it is:)
wow, dramatic, indeed. it startled me :-) and it's lovely!
Let me guess: Vaughan Williams' Sea Symphony?
Such a crisp haiku sparking deeper thoughts!http://merlinspielen.com/2012/09/13/summer-symphony/
Is this a domestic violence symphony?