Dream Snatcher
He came hair flopping
Over eyes dark as night
And held me captive
Drained good dripping
Relentlessly into the center
Catching remnants of stringy
Brain matter glistening with
Crimsoned violence
Rotting and foul
Shouted vitriolics
Echoing in floating feathers
As the breeze blew
We're in Stephen King Territory, aren't we? Quite vivid!
ReplyDeleteJust need to set in Maine :). Thanks Susan!
DeleteOkay, your dreamcatcher is definitely not working! Hee hee. Well done.
ReplyDeleteLOL Sherry! Thanks for stopping by! :)))
DeleteWow--like it. This is a dream-eater :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Susan...oooh unlike dream devourer
DeleteYum :)
Dream or nightmare well expressed either way but I think you need a larger dreamcatcher :)
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ReplyDeleteI fear there is not a dream catcher large enough to hold the good in a relationship gone bad in a big way:)
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ReplyDeleteI believe nightmares are scurrying through...your dream catcher may need some rework :)
ReplyDeleteWow, I like your dark version~ I'm from Maine ;D
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