Friday, October 1, 2010

Kaitlin in the rain

Little Kaitlin
skips and sings
in the shining rain
barefoot in the
cool green grass
never home will
she see


  1. I like the vivid imagery tinged with a lit of sadness. They say you can never go home, but I ask "Why not?"

    The thought of a child not being able to go home again makes me a bit sad.

    I appreciate all the positive feedback in regards to my poems at Poetic Asides with Robert. Bless you and your family.

  2. I encourage all to read the Kaitlin series...
    I would very much enjoy hearing feedback...

    Debra.. I enjoy being "thought provocative"

    Stu.. Very much enjoy your work at PA you are truly appreciated over on "The Street" All good things right back to you and yours!