|Happy Birthday To The Magical Wordle :)|
Oh shimmy origami dragon off the edge of that disheveled shelved wall- fall filamented, rise ethereal, wavering wonder in the dappled light, you much maligned misbegotten, misunderstood - now delight filled dragon swallowing exquisite acute and abstract aches all - until - coda peace flows as the sweet smoky flame of your spangling shimmered smile silencing the would- be cacophony of dreams’ ferment.
I, too, would like to see an origami dragon shimmy. That would be a wondrous sight indeed! Alas, as you point out, most dragons are maligned, misbegotten and misunderstood. :(ReplyDelete
It wasn't always that way. China's first emperor was a dragon turned man. That's why the reverence for the beast in China. Sad, we have no such dreams now.Delete
Ahhh... always an education! Thanks Claudsy... I suppose we can always resurrect whatever dreams we choose :)Delete
That was amazing! I enjoyed reading what you did!ReplyDelete
Oooh Annell ... "amazing?! wow!"... delighted that you enjoyed reading!Delete
Vivid imagery here, Pearl! I especially love the ending.ReplyDelete
Love all the wonderful words you've used in this poem, the sounds and alliterations linked together are quite spectacular!ReplyDelete
Oooh Marianne! High praise indeed.. "spectacular has me thinking of the Chinese New Years' parade in NY"Delete
Lovely and the alliteration works perfectly here, Pearl.ReplyDelete
Wonderful and yes, it is so sad that most dragons are maligned, misbegotten, and misunderstood, as you say. Gorgeous photo as well!ReplyDelete
Like Pamela, I enjoyed the alliteration, Pearl. And the picture you selected is perfect!ReplyDelete
I love the stream of consciousness flow and alliteration here Pearl - it's magical ...ReplyDelete
(one quibble that I hesitate to mention but figure I know you well enough to ask: should "dishelveled" read as it stands or is it a typo? I thought it more likely you meant either "dishevelled" or "dishelved" - the latter still being a bastardization spelling but could be used in a poem to go along with shelved ...or, I could be completely off-base and you meant what you meant in the first place ...)
mine is here: feel free to have at it!
Ah, Pearl, I wish I had time each day to pause here. I could re-energize just by reading your offering of the day. You can string words together in such a way that takes the reader on a solo flight with imagination.ReplyDelete
Excellent one, as always.
The words congealed together to form a magnificent dragon!ReplyDelete
You shimmied these words right together into a nice flow!ReplyDelete
How many of us feel your dragons plight? Wonderful. (thanks so very much for stopping by.)ReplyDelete
Wow! Thank you all for all the wonderful comments... So very much appreciated. I am grinning like a shimmied smiley happy dragon :)ReplyDelete
Pearl Girl, great to see you at the Whirl! Missed you. Love your positive take on the ever-maligned dragon, focusing on powers, on beauty. Very tasty answer to the Wordle! Love, AmerReplyDelete
Love the flow of this, wonderfully written!ReplyDelete