bench-in-a-misty-park.jpg Misty Park by Petr Kratochvil.jpg |
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The unbidden ghosts of bygone belief
they come and sit
the
unbidden ghosts of
bygone
belief –
gathering
in patches of sun-spill
there on
the hillside where sharp edges of slaughtered innocence
swarm, scraps
of flesh still seeping
for blood-memory
is exact and irrevocable
they come and sit
the
unbidden ghosts of trusting giggles
of that
little girl with clothes free-falling
haunting
each silent shudder
of the now-grown
woman
flinching
from each would-be loving touch
alone
in servituded-worship
of the
ever
Unbidden Ghosts
sitting at her side
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Well, I love it, Pearl. I played just a minute with the words late last night and you have used them in much the same way I was writing them, so guess I'm back to the drawing board with mine. Poetic minds thinking alike... Your photo choice is perfect for your poem. Super job.
ReplyDeleteAn eerie poem - goes so well with the photo.
ReplyDeleteoh pearl, my heart has a new fissure forming.
ReplyDeletePark benches are like that they whisper their secrets to you.
ReplyDeleteOh, Pearl. This is so powerfully sad. What a statement.
ReplyDeleteI agree with Laurie, Pearl. This evokes deep sadness. Well-penned.
ReplyDeleteThat's the trouble with the past... It happened...!
ReplyDeleteOh I can see those unbidden ghosts sharing the park bench with her. "that little girl with clothes free falling"......haunting.
ReplyDeletethere are ghosts and there are ghosts - & i am very familiar with their hauntings... nicely written
ReplyDeleteVery powerful and sad. I especially love the opening lines.
ReplyDeleteThe unbidden ghosts of bygone belief and trust seem to be a mockery to the woman grown into an alternative reality. A disturbing reflection on the "progress" of growing up.
ReplyDeleteVery strong and evocative. The photo is an excellent intro to the writing,
ReplyDeleteElizabeth
Definite sense of a physical haunting surrounding this woman..maybe those ghosts will leave..at some point..
ReplyDeleteIt kinda gives a spooky feeling indeed!!!
ReplyDeleteQuite brilliantly executed!
ReplyDeleteAnna :o]
Powerful!
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