Cynthia Cole Davis |
in the incomparable sweetness
they tiptoe together -
bare toes squishing fresh-dropped dung
bare toes squishing fresh-dropped dung
watching out for 'grownup-enters' creaks
reach for small fistfuls from the burlap bag
and run - run into and over the dawn lit field
wet grass - through corn - jumping mole holes -
run to the cool edge of the woods and there bury
their purloined seeds pressing into the untilled earth
their purloined seeds pressing into the untilled earth
with fingers tremulous stoked by stolid solid certainty -
knowing that before long a vine will sprout another and
on-until time tumbles - they are ready - and their wine flows –
knowing that before long a vine will sprout another and
on-until time tumbles - they are ready - and their wine flows –
Now, they lay together tasting the future on their lips - watching
clouds as the new rise-sun spills-
chewing on a pilfered stalk –
farming -
soy beans into grapes
clouds as the new rise-sun spills-
chewing on a pilfered stalk –
farming -
soy beans into grapes
until the call to breakfast
What a beautiful and kind of old-fashioned scene you have set here, Pearl. Makes me yearn for such a time and place. Too bad it has to be interrupted by the call to breakfast! Smiles.
ReplyDeleteI like the carefree feel of your poem and the trust in the future that only the young have. "Now, they lay together tasting the future on their lips" - this is my favorite line.
ReplyDeleteNow, they lay together tasting the future on their lips - watching
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Wonderful lines :D
Nice energy and movement in this. Love the tasting future on their lips. Nice vocabulary as well. Tremulous is a cool word. My grape vines ate about to push over my arbor
ReplyDeleteThere is a joy that only our inner child can find for us.. a joy of mud and soil, of grass and trees... if we could just wake that child.
ReplyDeletePoetry can help awaken that child...
DeleteThis: "tasting the future on their lips" is glorious and I love the way that you inverted "sunrise" into "new rise-sun"---makes the reader sit up and take notice of it in a new and attentive way that heightens the senses to it.
ReplyDeleteI love this whole escapade and felt as if I was running, too , through the fresh earth, planting seeds and dreaming of harvest. Just lovely, Pearl.
ReplyDeletePearl I love what you have done with the words here...a lighthearted, hopeful peace and growth in your beautiful lines!
ReplyDeleteWishing and hoping and believing are such assets to children as the future opens up for them. This is beautifully written...I was almost one of them.
ReplyDeleteAn image of tranquillity and beauty in the natural world.
ReplyDeleteclever use of the words turning into a beauty...a lovely poem...
ReplyDeleteI love this image of growing.. and that last line made me smile.
ReplyDeleteIt is a great poem. A wonderful image of hopes and dreams.
ReplyDeleteVery vivid and so beautiful!
ReplyDeleteSweet and so skillfully painted! 😍
ReplyDeleteI'd call this a beautiful ode to life ... bravo!
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