Uprooted
He had a plan the little
one
into his pack he stuffed
a root
prised from the
tumbled tree
they had cut – men in
boots
shouts of “timber”
laughter
in their voices as he
shivering
at his bedroom window
heard
Heaven growl – no sense
asking
“why?” from the Tall
Ones they’d
only turn a tepid
patronizing smile
He watched the tree
fall, the booted
thugs get into their
truck and leave
in the early morning
light and in bare
cold feet in hot
heart-burst he raced
somehow silently
through kitchen door
and tenderly
untangled a single
tendriled root
He had a plan
to travel far to
a place of sun
and gentle rain
and on a hill he
would plant his
tree and wait for
green shoots to
spring in rows
of mending as
he healed and
grew to grown
grew to grown
Lovely writing, Pearl. I am happy that even just one root was saved, and I do hope that it will have freedom to grow and thrive in its new sunny hillside location.
ReplyDeleteSometimes all one needs is the hope of future sun. Thank you Mary.
DeleteExquisite work! Truly inspiring :)
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Thank you Sanaa - to be inspiring is indeed a fantastically moving comment!
DeleteSometimes we have to uproot in order to plant and rebuild what is real and authentic to us...thoughtful write as ever Pearl
ReplyDeleteI love this interpretation Jae - Thank you!
DeleteI think if just more could have this passion for saving those tender roots, the world would turn to a better world.
ReplyDeleteYes, perhaps if more care were given to the tender roots the world would grow differently. <3 Thank you - your work today was brilliant.
Deletelovely :) it would be very meditative to do that.
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DeleteThank you Natasa - it might be meditative indeed.
DeleteHow sad to think of cutting trees, Pearl. But, that one small act of saving has saved a thousand more for sure. A wonderful, insightful poem you shared today. Thank you!
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Thank you so very much - your work is lovely ...
Deletelife is precious be it any
ReplyDeleteYes Vandana - precious in all its forms and permutations.
Delete"shouts of “timber” laughter' the expression truly paints those soulless killers...
ReplyDeleteI am thrilled that you caught that line in the soulessness intended . Thank you so very much.
DeleteI, too, was grateful that one root would survive. I love the shape of this poem very much.
ReplyDeleteI am not much for concrete poems and yet the last few have wanted to shape themselves - unclear what little imp is playing with my words ... Thank you Sherry.
DeleteBeing uprooted, can lead to great growth, even from a single, thin tendril. Winding its way toward renewal, rebirth, where it thrives and lingers.
ReplyDeleteAs an Canadian expat, I really related to this, Pearl!
Beautiful!
Poppy
Oh Poppy I am delighted that you related - since I am thoroughly delighted with you, your environment and your writing brought to light this week through Sherry's interview. Thank you!
DeleteOnce again I am brought to my knees on my visit here...the flow of the poem, the visual it makes in the shape of the words and the meaning behind them....'cold feet in hot heart-burst he raced' Tears flow as I race with him and hope his tree does indeed grow because he is the only smart one, the one who truly cares from his heart.
ReplyDeleteOh my goodness Donna - such high praise leaves me feeling unworthy. Thank you.
Deletenew beginnings personified here. an inspiring read, Pearl.
ReplyDeleteHealed and grew to grown... tree and man. Great analogy.
ReplyDeleteHow important it is to educate our children not only on the value of trees but all other things that sustain the earth and us too.
ReplyDeleteAs always ...a treat to visit and read your writing.
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Thank you so very much R.K. - always an honor to have a comment from you!
DeleteHi, glad to see you at Real Toads, happy to read you ... incisive moment here, cutting into a child's awareness of how adults tear into the big sweet world, perhaps too how growing up is necessarily part of that uprooting. The tree-shape of language is pretty but wasn't really necessary for me. Good work!
ReplyDeleteThank you - and I agree about the shape - not my signature by any means - lately some words have been playfully falling into such lines...
DeleteThis is really gorgeous, with such clever and wonderful word choices, and so cutting, really. Hah. It evokes a reaction, about the loss of innocence in the experience of this action. Really wonderful.
ReplyDeleteThank you Marian ... Love the "cutting" pun :)
DeleteChange and uprooting does produce growth in life....this is so filled with hope Pearl...I love it!
ReplyDeletePoignant expression, So beautifully penned. Hope is the one!
ReplyDeletePoignant...a lovely lead-in to spring with its message...planting the seeds of renewal..
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