Sunday Afternoon at the Movies
Was it
simply chance that your hand began to nest
in the
secret cleft of my thigh – So clever you were
reaching beyond
the basket of popcorn to the ripe
fruit of me,
swept in hot flush, blinking in the dark
As unknown nova ignited velvet flickering to explosion
Silently, secretly, as you sought an errant kernel of corn
~
A vivid poem, thanks for sharing.
ReplyDeleteNissa - Thank you for stopping to read and for taking the time to leave a comment. Very much appreciated :)
DeleteSome people can really get naughty and take advantage.
ReplyDeleteHahah... Thank you for stopping and commenting Vandana - I do very much appreciate your taking the time! :)
DeleteGood heavens! This poem explodes with seduction! I really, really like it!
ReplyDeleteOOOh thank you M&M ... I am thoroughly delighted that you enjoyed and so very much appreciate your taking the time to let me know! :)
DeleteHa! I like this one, Pearl. The subtlety of chasing the kernel is an adept technique tried by many, no doubt.
ReplyDeleteWe chased the words down similar paths this week.
I think it was the flesh that got us ! :) Thanks for stopping and commenting ... as always appreciate you in oh so many ways :)
DeleteOoh er... :)
ReplyDeleteHahaha ...I love when I have you oohing and er-ing :)
Deletewheww... very sultry
ReplyDeleteWell, do tell. This is a fun poem. Great job, Pearl.
ReplyDeleteAwww thanks Sabra so happy you enjoyed and stopped to let me know :)
DeleteOh...that popcorn, it can get away.
ReplyDeleteCan it ever :)
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ReplyDeletewheww... very sultry
Oooh I like sultry - Thank you Robert for stopping and the lovely compliment ... Much appreciated :)
Deleteoooh, pretty sexy Pearl!
ReplyDeleteSometimes the words just fall that way :)
DeleteOh those errant kernels! Who would have thought? Cool one, Pearl.
ReplyDeleteThanks Sherry ... You have me smiling :)
DeleteAhh, the smell of the movie theatre..the popcorn so evocatively drawn..stolen moments..or given moments? maybe that's the magic..
ReplyDeleteJae - Thank you for stopping and I appreciate the time you took for this vivid comment! So much appreciated :)
Deleteseductive... love the descriptions.
ReplyDeleteOh thank you so very much for stopping and this lovely comment - so very very much appreciated.
DeleteMagical! I was really drawn into your poem.
ReplyDeleteWell, well, well. Me thinks this stolen moment should not be witnessed.
ReplyDeletewhew!
ReplyDeleteYes. Oh my :)
DeleteI love it when as I read the poetry out loud I can't help from laughing. This is so good.
ReplyDeleteOh a writer's dream realized to evoke tears or laughter - I so very enjoy the laughter! Appreciate you stopping and sharing this comment that has me grinning :) THANK YOU
DeleteWhew! And Ha! This is bursting with heat and fun too! Thank you.
ReplyDeleteThat is some hot popcorn!
ReplyDeleteSure. Sure. Do either of you remember anything of the movie? ;-)
ReplyDeleteHot and funny at the same time! Good one, Dr. P.
ReplyDeleteOh so well done!
ReplyDeleteAnna :o]
Seductive poem, Pearl. Well done.
ReplyDeletePamela
I wouldn't have thought to compare hot, buttered popcorn with a sexual experience, but if the kernel fits... :)
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