|Sunrise by Javier Baño|
On Powders’ Peak
mutely into the pit of Locks
thrumming through the moon-light
On Powders’ Peak
the ancient staff etched
ever faintly in stone
points to the dawn
Where the lost are found
persons are reconfigured
and all answers are
written on soft petals falling
from Powders’ Peak
Nice use of repetition, Pearl.ReplyDelete
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Awwww Walt - thank you dear poetic friend - lovely lovely comment :) looking forward to playing at PAD if the RoboEditor doesn't slow us down! :)Delete
in re-reading this poem there seemed to be a redemptive tone to it - somehow echoing the day - do you agree?Delete
I like it, especially the last stanza. These lines really grab me: "Where the lost are found persons are reconfigured"ReplyDelete
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