On Powders’ Peak
mutely into
the pit of Locks
thrumming
through the moon-light
On Powders’ Peak
the ancient
staff etched
ever
faintly in stone
points to
the dawn
Where the
lost are found
persons are
reconfigured
and all
answers are
written on
soft petals falling
from
Powders’ Peak
After….
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