I walk the whorls
Each concentric line
Etched in mind time
Melting footsteps each
And all one winding
after
I walk the whorls
Graze the newborn
Head still wet
Dip a curtsy to
A lovers’ liquid
Leer
I walk the whorls
Wash the sweet fish stink
Fresh fileted from
That chilled childhood
Lake
I walk the whorls
Belly flesh brown
Taut hip bones jutting
A bead of sweat in the
Sun
Setting, settling, softening
I walk the whorls
Self, others, sweet, sour,
Blood soaked, perfumed
And lotioned in the sun and
Shade abandoned and abandoner
I walk the whorled
Wondering
Why
Wow! Very nice very visual sensual love it!
ReplyDeleteI was really inspired by this prompt too
Hi Sara - truly delighted you enjoyed - yes was terrific prompt :)
DeleteLove the alliteration of "walk the whorls"! Like an eddying of the senses! Beautiful!
ReplyDeleteGemma - an "eddying of he senses" ahhhhh thank you!
DeleteAh, now I understand what you meant by #2 in your comment on my blog!
ReplyDeleteThe whorls sweep me along in whirling fantasy, from babyhood to languid sunbathing adult.
So very much appreciated Viv - thank you for taking the ride :)
Deletea 'whorlwind' of song....
ReplyDeleteAh Joanne one pun deserves another :) thank you!
DeleteI liked this very much. Enjoyed the words as I read your write! Liked how they felt in my mouth, and formed on my tongue.
ReplyDeleteAw Anell thank you - your comment is a poem itself!
DeleteOooo this is a gem Pearl!!! I love that you walked all of these different whorls and then the play od whorled for world!! So smart!! :)
ReplyDeleteOh Hannah thank you ! I debated about "whorled" for world as too "precious" delighted you enjoyed :)
Deletewalking the whorls is a wonderful image. I love how you crafted this.
ReplyDeleteAn interesting labyrinth of words :)
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed your take on the prompt! I love the whorls you shared :D and the views you gave us!
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