She thought love was reciprocal
She thought love was reciprocal
Gathered together all for one
Bright eyed enthusiasm yet
Renewed each time together met
Gathered together all for one
She thought love was reciprocal
Brought bouquets of words from her heart
Month melted years were not apart
She thought love was reciprocal
Brought bouquets of words from her heart
Month melted years were not apart
Bright eyed enthusiasm yet
Renewed each time together met
She thought love was reciprocal
Gathered together all for one
Renewed each time together met
She thought love was reciprocal
Gathered together all for one
Month melted years were not apart
Brought bouquets of words from her heart
Gathered together all for one
She thought love was reciprocal
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The Whispered Wind
Brought bouquets of words from her heart
Gathered together all for one
She thought love was reciprocal
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The Whispered Wind
The whispered wind floated in air
In sweet embrace they gathered there
Connected in diversity
Shimmered shining sacrosanct
They came from corners of the earth
The whispered wind floated in the air
Dropping hard or tentatively
Lyrics fell on the glistened street
Once a season a storm might pass
Stirring passions and poetry
The whispered wind floated in the air
As all settled back into one
Walking safely on paving stone
Joined in collective love of same
Tumbling as lovers in leaved grass
The whispered wind floated in the air
Until it hissed.
Both poems are very lovely and effective.
ReplyDeleteI LOVE She Thought Love Was Reciprocal....perfect in form and meter......I so love the pantoum! Well done.
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