In the Land of Cumbersome
In the Land of Cumbersome a tiny boy pushed from his pallet
by besotted siblings trudged through the cold near morning - reluctant
sun thinly shafted as yellow smoke coaxed through the dense air by will of his upward
staring still-fresh senses, shouting silently in unsurrendered plaintive plea a wondrous "Why?" repeated - as a map of murmur carrying him sleepily
forward through the hardened fields to the cement of the city - where he, just another
faceless stray - eyes still burning
bright entranced by a distant door yet to be found - settled on
his spot and waited for the rain of infrequent coin and common censure to begin
to pelt with familiar constancy the soaring power of his unearned burning expectation of Yet to Come.
Hi Pearl, sounds like quite a journey.
ReplyDeleteAwww... Hard to be bullied, even by your sibblings.
ReplyDeleteThis is chock full of description, Pearl. I'll give him a banana, but never a dime. The cynic in me believes it won't be well spent. Excellent write.
ReplyDeleteI like the "reluctant sun" and "a map of murmur" is such a great image.
ReplyDeleteRichard
Thanks Richard ....
DeleteI know that Land of Cumbersome! Well wordled.
ReplyDeleteWhile striving to survive has always existed, your words bring us into a layer often not witnessed. I would hope that in the present as well as future pan-handling would become less and less as we learn to better care for one another.
ReplyDeleteI'm amazed at your skill in painting an entire portrait of this poor child in one sentence. Well wordled, Pearl. :)
ReplyDeleteAw thanks Traci :)
DeleteAh yes Jules attaining the as yet unmet " yet to come"
ReplyDeletePoor tyke; reminds me of the cuckoo being kicked out of his nest - the ultimate rejection ... I like the way these prose-poems seem to be going ...
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