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Saturday, March 8, 2014

Boys and their donuts

Boys and their donuts

Hey Miss Motley! - we call out to you inside
"Will you leaves us a platter of them jelly donuts 
lined up like you do in a row like good soldiers. 
Nah, don’t you bother coming up to the window
we’ll all catch you later after we done celebrate
our win - Paradise in a our cotton field-trip
Your powdered sugar stays sweet on our lips
as we sprawl in the sun – and later sugar stunned
stumble home in the setting sun separating one after 
one, each and all of us forgetting as always to swing back on by


  1. Feeling of excitement in this variation ~ nice use of words

    1. Thanks for stopping by and commenting. Much appreciated :)

  2. Love this sweet spill, in particular:
    "and later sugar stunned
    stumble home in the setting sun"

    Gorgeous alliteration and assonance here, my friend.

    1. Awww De - your comment is as sweet as jelly donut - Thank you so very much :)

  3. A platter of them jelly donuts sounds delightful!