Thursday, October 5, 2023

Once





 

Once 

 

Once my world was dotted

with endless hills,

and I climbed, or skipped, or ran, confident

barefoot, or booted, flip-flopped sure-footed

and if I slipped, the worst was a grazed knee

or a bit of a bruised heart – if an obstacle

appeared – a jagged rock or loosening purchase

the earth was my friend – digging in hand-holds

or toe-touches – or walk abouts – I climbed on - safely

surely, always – onward – convinced in my clear

anticipation of the always achieved acme – 

daisies under blue skies - a flat place to sit for a while –

and when rested –refreshed -revitalized – renewed –

I’d stretch, stand, limbs loose and long, atop that hill –

breathe fresh air and survey the view –

the endless panorama of hill after verdant hill

awaiting me….

 

Now, in surreality I walk a flat landscape – 

 slopeless spreading toward an ever approaching horizon

yearning to believe that beyond lay fields of daisied dominion

searching

for

one

more

hill

to 

be

10 comments:

  1. Beautiful poem, Pearl! I see this as a comment on the time of youth compared to the time of "age." I hope I am correct in this assumption. In young years we are not intimidated by all of the hills & tackle them one after another. In age, we approach that horizon.......and yes, I believe strongly there WILL be
    "fields of
    daisied dominion
    searching
    for
    one
    more
    hill
    to
    be"

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    1. Hi Mary - sorry for delay in responding... I was away and can only seem to comment when at my desktop. Anyhooo.. yes this was the comparison between youth and the time of 'age' and I appreciate your positive take on the poem.

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  2. Love how the playful spirit of youth calms down with time and there's hope in every breath.

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    1. Oh Sumana - Apologies for delay in responding I was away and can only seem to comment from my desktop. Anyooo .. appreciate your comment and the your positive reading of perhaps more playful feelings than I had intuited within myself along with hope in "every breath"

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  3. Ha, I relate to this so much. I once BOUNDED everywhere, with high-hearted hope that all would be well. It is more difficult terrain now, and I am older and so weary. I have to stay on level surfaces so I dont topple over. LOL. So your poem really speaks to me! And the hope at the end - since we humans are hard-wired for hope.

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    1. As I wrote to you elsewhere - Apologies for delay in responding I was away and can only seem to comment from my desktop. Anyooo yes.. this is a commentary on the changes from bounding to bound... bound where... hmmmm.... Thank you for the comment and the "Ha"

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  4. After this "the earth was my friend," the end brought tears! Such a stark change of image truly depicts what's been happening with hope given the evidence of our eyes and loss of innocence The earlier image was me, young and fearing nothing. Powerful piece! Thank you.

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    1. Apologies for delay in responding I was away and can only seem to comment from my desktop. Awwww Susan ... tears ... what a compliment and a heartfelt reading of the emotions prompting this write - you were right there with me. Thank you!

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  5. Yes, a wonderful poem. After my Husband died, I moved to Taos, NM, and my mantra was to walk gracefully in Taos, an old town of many chipped sidewalks, nothing regular, or sure. It has been nearly 30 years now, and much has been replaced, the surfaces are better, much looks different today. Still an old town with lots of history. annell/SomethingsIThinkAbout-annell

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    1. Apologies for delay in responding I was away and can only seem to comment from my desktop. Thank you Annell... I love the image of your walking those chipped sidewalks in Taos - with grace. Appreciate this wonderful response.

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