Grandmother A. had always
been a plain woman.
Her gaze steady, able and
implacable even as that
young girl who stared back
through the scattered
memory of those who knew her
then – Plain, solid
“not one to rattle anybody’s
cage” Uncle Ed said, yet
in the back of the chapel
there sat a white haired gent
bent, back aching on the hard, hard pew, and remembered
in the midst of the droning
secular service – remembered the
splendor of that harvest, and
Adelaide’s skin, luminous, satin
velvet under his trembling
farm-roughed fingers – mystic skin
gathering each cloud of his
storm troubled mind sweeping it all
away on the stiff breeze
cooling them lying together in splendor
Oh that harvest, of the splendor long ago –
as Adelaide blossomed
in his heart as no other ever would or
did.
On the service droned to its end.
On the service droned to its end.
Her grandchildren safe-grown,
scurry-filed past –a parade of condescending ignorance – Smirking at the
dozing bent gent, sated smile, mouth open, head flung back, arms opened.
And finally. Alone, in the emptied chapel
he rose, walked to her coffin, held the edge of the smooth wood –
under hands gentled with age and bent in open reverence to his forever secret Adelaide
He, un-named, unclaimed
lover of his Adie. Keeper of their stupendous scattered harvest splendor.
His luminous Adie, only now rippling his title in the dancing dust of memory sunbeams.
Her voice now,
His luminous Adie, only now rippling his title in the dancing dust of memory sunbeams.
Her voice now,
clear as then,
releasing
their secret
smile
swirling
on the moving breeze, her hair lifting, tousled again as she lay on
satin-smooth-as-her-skin
on the moving breeze, her hair lifting, tousled again as she lay on
satin-smooth-as-her-skin
back on that harvest plain –
Sweet Adelaide chuckling now, at the young fertile farmer
Sweet Adelaide chuckling now, at the young fertile farmer
above her time and time again moving, moving, moving
where her earnest husband could find neither time nor place
where her earnest husband could find neither time nor place
Finally -trilling on the moving
breeze, clear as a songbird, his rightful title,
In their rightful time.
Now.
Grandfather. In their rightful time.
Now.
~
The Sunday Whirl
heartfelt tale.............
ReplyDeleteCaptivating poem, Pearl. Some secrets go to the grave.....and perhaps it is for the best, but sad that those who loved could not be together in life.
ReplyDeleteSuch a sad story.. Still bittersweet to have that moment alone by her coffin.. And the surprise at the end telling a new story... Wow.
ReplyDeletethat's a moving narrative.well penned.
ReplyDelete"a parade of condescending ignorance".......what a sensationally good line! And what a story. Well done, Pearl!
ReplyDeleteI love the poetic time switches you use to tell this moving story. Bravo.
ReplyDeletemoving story...
ReplyDeleteThis is wonderful Pearl!
ReplyDeleteTouching.
ReplyDeleteA lovely but sad tale. I love the way you changed your style of writing throuout the piece. It added interest and atmosphere. Congratulations on giving me my best read of the day.
ReplyDeleteOh my goodness Keith... what a huge compliment - Very much appreciated and delighted that you enjoyed.
DeleteWhat stories lovers could tell yet so few are revealed, but there are memories which are cherished for ever. I wonder how many readers will now think on their own past? Beautiful tale Pearl.
ReplyDeleteMore poignant because I just read of the passing of two people who were dear to many people. There is a poignant hush and the person that many will never know (as your tale conveys beautifully)
ReplyDeleteThere is sadness in secrecy, but perhaps the memory would not have been as sweet otherwise. Some people are better lovers than spouses.
ReplyDeleteAh the secrets kept and never divulged. Makes one wonder how many other stories we have never heard...
ReplyDeleteElizabeth
I will make every attempt to respond to each comment personally - Please accept my deep appreciation for your stopping by and responding with such lovely remarks ... My heart overflows with gratitude to each and all :)
ReplyDeletethats a breezy writing
ReplyDeleteClever use of time in this one. Nicely done.
ReplyDeleteYou have outdone yourself with this one, Pearl. A riveting, melancholy tale, written with movements of time.
ReplyDeleteI like this very much, but I think I would have liked it even better had it stopped at 'his forever secret Adelaide'. I guess I like some mystery. (Of course, that would eliminate your punchline.)
ReplyDeleteIn re-reading I could defintely agree and when the 'wordle words' constraints are removed - I would definitely consider this suggestion. Thanks Rosemary :)
DeleteA touchy story poetically expressed
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