I watch as filaments
like dream fragments
fly powered by only
my exhaled breath as
I hold the stem
with still uncreased
fingers
believing
as light
falls golden
in
magic time
shimmering
Pearl Girl, I love your wish expressed without having to write the actual word. Unique and lush. Love, Amer http://sharplittlepencil.com/2012/05/04/wish-upon-a-star/
I love this little bit of magic!
ReplyDeleteOooh thank you Karen... Was delightful to have the Thursday Think Tank as a little "magic" in the midst of a particularly hectic yesterday!
DeleteThe exhaled breath seems to me to be the wish for...
ReplyDeleteRaven Has One Wish
Yes! the exhaled breath is the wish..... :)
DeleteBrevity, beauty! Great poem, Pearl!
ReplyDeleteOoooh thank you Hannah.... Thank you :)
DeletePearl Girl, I love your wish expressed without having to write the actual word. Unique and lush. Love, Amer
ReplyDeletehttp://sharplittlepencil.com/2012/05/04/wish-upon-a-star/
Thank you Amer ... Miss you over at The Street ... Come visit :)
ReplyDeleteWonderful, I love what you wrote,
ReplyDelete"as light
falls golden
in
magic time
shimmering"
this was visually stunning!
Well Done