in the night
There in the corner something
scurry scratching, scrabbling
my breath coming in short
pants .. I restrain them ..
In the sudden stillness
a cricket sings outside
or closer, always hard to tell
There in the corner by the
ceiling something flutters
wings flicker fast across
my eyes swallowed by
the navied night
There in the corner across the room
high up where I cannot see –
chirrup, chirrup, chirrup, chirrup
rat, mouse, wounded bird ..
damaged soul?
Its pain screams quietly
ending all possibility of sleep
This is really eerie, Pearl. Quite disruptive to see something in the corner of one's room and not to be able to discern exactly what it is. I hate flying (or any) bugs anyway, so this very descriptive poem really gave me the creeps! Nice work!
ReplyDeleteOh thank you Mary .. I'm delighted that you enjoyed.
DeletePowerful! So many phrases caught me up. Here's one " navied night"! I feel this poem thoroughly. I have nestled in bed with sounds of the night catching my attention and imagination: What if they are screams of pain? What if they aren't? O, the stories we write alone and awake in the night!
ReplyDeleteYes Susan! Those "stories that we write alone and awake in the night!" as far as "navied night" I am thrilled you liked the phrase which came to me years ago and which I've used in quite a few poems by now. Thank you!
DeleteIt does seem that sounds can be louder in the night. I can relate to this poem deeply Pearl.
ReplyDeleteAww Carrie thank you and I just finished and thoroughly enjoyed your poem this week!
DeleteThis is so good, Pearl. You have captured the sounds and also the feelings hearing them. Really wonderful! Always good to read you.
ReplyDeleteThank you Sherry .. warms my heart that you enjoyed and considered that I captured the sounds. You know that I am a major devotee of all you write - it always a pleasure and this week of course no exception!
DeleteYou take us into the night with its animal sounds, until the last disturbing lines catch us off guard. Beautifully structured, vivid imagery.
ReplyDeleteThank you - Thank you - Thank you Dora for catching the disturbing last lines -
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DeleteWow Pearl! How wonderfully you've captured night's voice that could be so uncomfortable! "damaged soul?"... The feeling hidden in the words is quite moving.
ReplyDeleteAww thank you Sumana I just found your comment this morning. I love that you picked up (of course you would) on the "damaged soul"
DeleteThis poem is very evocative you have captured this night so vividly. Great write
ReplyDeleteThank you Alan.. I just read your comment this morning. So very much appreciated!
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