Wild Horses
you might have well have
loosed wild horses at your
imperious signal to thrust
bullets of hoof prints over
my heart
you might have well
as I stand at the edge of
incomprehension
feet leaden - locks
of ball and chain
frozen in a single
paralytic spot
wondering at the wind of
vitriol that rose to whirl
in vicious vacuous
stoned laced stings
where love once had
lived
and now cheeks cut, heart
bleeding under the cloven
hooves of your indifference
this heart under which
you once grew from a single
cell seeks to repair itself
alone as you plant your
unfamiliar flag
on a hill of your own making
with those of your own chosing
never looking back
This poem written by the seat of my pants - captures the mood if not the particulars...
ReplyDeleteAww Pearl...I don't want to assume, but your poem reads as if we are maybe fighting through the same terrible place...I really hope not, but if we are, I send you all my love in any case and anything else you can use...I send it to you anyhow...no matter what...Love Sharon
ReplyDeleteAwww thank you m'dear ... I send you the gentler promise of the rose in the second poem here - all will be well for us both <3
ReplyDeletehttp://www.drpkp.com/2014/09/there-were-horses.html
DeleteBeautiful-I am trampled ! Dr Pearl amazing poem- galloping complaining all the way
ReplyDeleteHa Ha - Enjoy your comments and delighted that you enjoyed the poem :)
DeleteI can't imagine a more powerful metaphor of your pain. "this heart... seeks to repair itself" I pray healing to you and the relationship. Beautiful, shattering write.
ReplyDeleteAs mentioned to others - not necessarily autobiographical but so much appreciate the good wishes and the comments on the write :)
DeletePainful and well expressed.
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Thanks R.K. - Hope that you found my comments on your site - which is simply outstanding!
DeleteI too pray for healing… during this time of t'shuva, may this come to pass my friend.
ReplyDeleteAgain - not necessarily autobiographical - but always appreciate your attention and care and thank you so very much for stopping by :) Hope all is well with you and yours - wishing you a happy, healthy, peaceful and always sweet New Year.
DeleteI love the change in style...I would say written firmly in the saddle...a solid and purposeful write...you go grrl!
ReplyDeleteThank you Jae Rose ... love the "go grrl!"
DeleteOh, Pearl, I cringe in response to the "bullets" and the "stings" "where love once had lived..." I feel the pain "of your indifference", and I pray "for this heart under which you once grew from a single cell" to heal. Yes, it captures the mood powerfully! Sending love...
ReplyDeleteAhh a poet enjoys a powerful response - thank you Nurit :)
DeleteVery intense. A strong expression of an emotional situation. I hope the writing of it helped you cope.
ReplyDeleteHmmm not necessarily autobiographical - although thanks for comment about 'intensity' :)
DeleteOh, Pearl... I feel for you and the hoof prints upon your heart. Much love. Let the ink flow.
ReplyDeleteThanks for stopping by Meena - Yes, the ink is flowing :)
DeleteThose cloven hoofs of indifference can do much damage. But it doesn't have to be irreparable damage. Healing can occur, even if scarring is evident. May it be so.
ReplyDeleteAnother Whirl with Basho
Enjoy the hopeful interpretation :)
DeleteSending you love, lovely lady.
ReplyDeleteThank you Rosemary - however did you intuit I might need some... you are truly witchcrafty :) <3
Delete"bullets of hoofprints over my heart".....and the "cloven hoofs of indifference" - wow. Powerful writing Pearl.
ReplyDeleteAwww thank you Sherry - you always seem to 'get' me :)
DeleteThe place your writing comes from struck a nerve. Not at the moment but the not too distant past. When your child - (or anything you have created for that matter) seems to abandon you it is nothing but that forlorn heartache. xo Teri
ReplyDeleteSo lovely you "enjoyed" :)
Delete"cloven hooves of your indifference" - I see devils and fauns.
ReplyDeleteAhh - interesting take - vivid imagination :)
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