a twig snapped in the
slashing rain
and the mother weary with
labor lifted
her head wobbling on thin
stalked neck
and looked toward the
sound only she
heard – the others off to
side swapping
stories sitting in ash
around the small fire
one blackened limb
touching another their
shadows stretching up the
cave wall – she
could feel the rain as
though it poured clean
and cool – she could feel
the rain as though
spirits of the grand mother of all walked with
clean feet and soft hands
and lifted her in
this cavern of pain and
indifference, washed her
body and hair free of
sweat and desperation and
agony and delivered born unto
her a swaddled infant –
as the rain stilled to the
mist – radiates of a new dawn
showering her shoulders as
she stood infant to breast
in the doorway looking out
onto a ribbon of tomorrow
poised to walk ….
she smiled
Love that smile... the best ever.
ReplyDeleteI like this very original look back at childbirth in a cave. I especially love the ministrations of the grandmother of all.
ReplyDeleteshe could feel the rain as though
ReplyDeletespirits of the grand mother of all walked with
clean feet and soft hands and lifted her in
this cavern of pain and indifference, washed her
body and hair free of sweat and desperation and
agony and delivered born unto her a swaddled infant –
as the rain stilled to the mist
Sigh.. beautiful!!
This is a special gem of a poem! I love the last words "poised to walk" ...
ReplyDeleteOK... OK... :) One of your finest writings to date and there were others. But somehow this piece conveyed all the accumulation of the others.
ReplyDeleteVery impressive in my opinion.
ZQ
Wonderfully illustrated moment
ReplyDeleteWell done, Pearl! I love 'ribbon of tomorrow' and 'her head wobbling on thin-stalked neck.'
ReplyDeleteWonderful imagery.
Beautifully imagined, and told.
ReplyDeleteHow well you captured that moment of our distant ancestor mothers coping with childbirth alone. Even though much of the world copes with the difficulties of childbirth now there are still too many babies dying then or in their first year yet we choose to spend millions searching space rather than helping the needy here on Earth. Humans have such strange priorities,
ReplyDeleteA stunning image to leave us with..
ReplyDeleteBeautiful! 👏
ReplyDeleteIn A Course in Miracles, life as created by God has nothing to do with what we call or know of as life in the body. Life is soul: non-material, non-dualistic, and everlasting. Possibly the richest statement in the Course on the essence of life -- what it is and what it is not
ReplyDeleteOrigins of the Living Miracles