Poems Writings & Reflections
Pearl Ketover Prilik
rise ina conflagration from shadow andshame ... like that!
A sensuous conflagration, it seems!
There is nothing quite like that first kiss, is there?
'bursting…to flames'...a most beautiful moment...
Wow! That was a great reading for me.ZQ
Brilliant use of the given words, sparse yet special!
Love the rising to flames... sounds like rebirth
I like the idea of eyes 'touching'---it's not a combination of words that we usually read and it gives the reader pause to think about the intimacy of it.
I can feel that looking back at that first kiss......sigh. Made me remember mine. LOL.
Interesting setting "into the garden of youth"Have a good Sundaymuch love...
Just gorgeous writing!
First kiss... lovely!
I am absolutely certain that nostalgia praises that moment more than it deserves--and yet, that is where I, too visit first. Beautifully captured.
Conflagration is right, for me at least
I love how the construction leads me on through the music and imagery, to that final burst of flame.
Flames rise and roar in this one, Pearl. Love it!
Love the heat of that first kiss, Pearl. :)
So much delight in a first kiss...unless, of course, it misses the mark. (I have had both experiences, ha)
Lovely portrayal of a special memory, dear Pearl.