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She woke a tiny girl in a
large apartment
marooned on a canopy bed
high in the sky
Walls of glass – far above
this new concrete
city -silently scurrying
far far below -her bed
piled high with pillows –
a cover to be called
a duvet – as though it made all the difference.
Her mother took her swing, made a good deal,
accepted as a sign from a
divine Universe the
tall man who kept coming
back to Do-Drop-In
diner and finally after
thousand cups of coffee
and steamy side-wise
smiles took them away
to here –Her mother now
wore shoes with high
heels and bright red
lipstick – lifted a little finger
when she sipped wine –
from a closet filled with
fancy glasses – all the same – all sorts of repeat
things like that here – fat stuffed animals choked
with neck bows glassy-eyed
on the window seat
like one of those infinity
mirrors things repeating –
on and on in this endless
apartment -a pinned up
butterfly behind glass walls –she lay marooned on
this canopy bed high in
the sky and -it was wrong
selfish wrong -she knew it-but she could not deny
that she ached for the small stream at the end of
the dirt road behind the
school where she used to
stop on the way home - looking for tadpoles and
the
glint of copper pennies -she knew it was wrong
to look for a line that would draw them back – back
to wish each thing to vanish into a vacuum of never-
had-happened – for time to fly
back to the then-when
she walked on ground - bare feet in the soft warm dirt
of home – hope a thing that was only an
ache in her
mother’s eye.
Longing a for a simpler life. I can empathise with her thoughts. This is beautifully written.
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This poem is wonderful to read and envision. I especially love the closing lines.
ReplyDeleteCaptivating, but I am caught up in "an ache in her mother’s eye." That's splendid.
ReplyDeleteAye, but I am with her! I'd hope for the earth and escape from senseless repetition, too. For human closeness. Powerful piece.
ReplyDeleteOh, the way you've captured her feelings of imprisonment in her new life through the description of items in her surroundings is absolutely brilliant...the stuffed animals "choked" & "glassy-eyed"--the butterfly "pinned up...behind glass walls"---it's such an effective contrast to the warm freedom of "bare feet in the soft warm dirt of home."
ReplyDeleteWhat a marvelous tale. I was drawn in immediately and hopeful to the very end! Kudos
ReplyDeleteWhat a sad, new world the little girl is now trapped in.
ReplyDeleteThis is so very poignant, Pearl. I understand why the girl would wish to go back to those simpler times.....to walk bare foot on warm dirt. Somehow I don't think the mother really loves this guy. Somehow I don't think this will last.
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mother’s eye.
Soo tender.. so poignant!
This is a very sad story... the longing for simplicity...I feel a gilded cafe is still a cage
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ReplyDeleteBeautifully contrasted.
Quite heart-wrenching. I think all your readers will feel for, and with, that girl.
ReplyDeleteA poignant tale that rings true for me.
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only an ache in her mother’s eye
Great ending Dr Pearl! It leaves readers to ponder with lots of possibilities and all towards kind thoughts for Mom!
Hank
I completely understand the girl's wishes. I love the image of animals choked and glassy-eyed. Wonderful poem, Pearl.
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ReplyDeleteto wish each thing to vanish into a vacuum of never-" beautiful and deeply touching!