For Fabiola D'Antuono
It is all a carnival
Is it not
The clowns
The lights
The ups
The downs
It is all a carnival
Is it not
The spun sugar
On your lips
The concentration
The gleeful slips
It is all a carnival
Is it not
On this revolving
cerrulean dot
It is all a carnival
Is it not
And until closed
All we get to have got
On this revolving
cerrulean dot
It is all a carnival
Is it not
And until closed
All we get to have got
It IS all the most fantastical carnival. I love this!
ReplyDeleteOh Sherry - Thank you - I'm editing an anthology and getting ready for a vacation - so tired that I actually forgot when I was leaving for four days - thought I was leaving on Thursday (until last night) and realized I'm leaving Wednesday ... and so I must admit I posted this one early and was hoping that the "wordle box" would come up after midnight... I am delighted that you enjoyed :)
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ReplyDeletelike the idea of it "all" being a carnival :-)
You captured the spirit of carnival here, most definitely.
ReplyDeletePearl enjoyed the rhythm like a spinning ride and the cerulean dot! Well done :-)
ReplyDeleteI like how you made me feel like I was twirling! Yes, you captured this swirly vision so well! :D
ReplyDeleteit is all a carnival, it is! i like this very much, the revolution in the words and the reflection. :) x
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