Velvet you lifted
a tiny pot from
the windowsill high
above, brushed petal
to cheek and in
transported loamy
lushness opened
yet another wonderland
door
Thank you each and everyone A fine welcome Poets United has begun!
Delighted and honored looking forward to reading and commenting in turn.....to those I have just met....thank you for the kind reception...to " old" friends as always so good you hear from you.... At some point I will get to figuring out how to spruce up " imagine". For now please just...well..imagine how it might evolve..
these are lines inseparably connected with each other, like an organic life being. what a imagination! and thanks for dropping comment on my blog. :-) as an individualist, me too, not a group person, but i am always delighted to see some bright individuals, and enjoy their creative works!
There was something immediately emotive about this moment caught in time.
ReplyDeleteThe senses, smell, touch, sound can so easily trigger reverie. Lovely.
ReplyDeletelovely soft poem
ReplyDeleteHey, Pearl! I love this, especially "brushed petal to cheek"... nice image.
ReplyDelete~laurie
Thank you Kim :)
ReplyDeleteThis is a lovely image. I love petals against the cheek!
ReplyDeleteLovely on multiple levels.
ReplyDeleteWelcome to Poets United Number 200!
when one door closes, another opens.
ReplyDeletelovely tale.
Touching imagery!
ReplyDeleteA soft and dreamy piece. Perfect, as Spring knocks gently at our doors.
ReplyDeletePoetry24…where news is the Muse
Pearl - you create such strong, vivid imagery with your words. From the first words: "Velvet you lifted..." I was totally caught up in your poem!
ReplyDeleteThank you each and everyone
ReplyDeleteA fine welcome
Poets United has begun!
Delighted and honored looking forward to reading and commenting in turn.....to those I have just met....thank you for the kind reception...to " old" friends as always so good you hear from you.... At some point I will get to figuring out how to spruce up " imagine". For now please just...well..imagine how it might evolve..
Again thanks to all!
PKP
such a delicate and lovely poem...
ReplyDeleteVelvet magic ....
ReplyDeletethese are lines inseparably connected with each other, like an organic life being. what a imagination!
ReplyDeleteand thanks for dropping comment on my blog. :-)
as an individualist, me too, not a group person, but i am always delighted to see some bright individuals, and enjoy their creative works!
Yun Yi... thank you so very much what a lovely compliment!
ReplyDeleteThank you for opening the door. I love the feel of velvet petals too.
ReplyDeleteSo lovely these fragile words for these fragile petals...wonderful..bkm
ReplyDeleteThese violets seem v.popular with gardeners and houseplant enthusiasts. I've learned a lot about looking after them.
ReplyDeleteI love the words you chose as one is embracing change. The delicate balance and trepidation...beautiful~
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