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Saturday, May 18, 2013

In the fairied time of Nebulous


In the fairied time of Nebulous

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In the fairied time of Nebulous
A mother cut with vision opaque bleak stared out over the hover of mist beyond the slab of concreted future and from the crush of her cut heart felt the gossamer touch of wings brush her tear creased cheek and the sudden blazing torch of hope in the filamented timing of sudden sunny certainty lit the ribboned verdant field to Possibility the tinkle of fairy breath chiming in laughter bubbling from just the other room



16 comments:

  1. smiles...a bit of magic that...and sounds like it was just in time for her as well...i hope that the possibility becomes reality for her..

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  2. I like the sound of that little bell..it is like a smile and giggle...

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  3. I love the "tinkle of fairy breath...bubbling from just the other room."

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  4. Really love the fairy breath and the laughter! Happy anniversary to you, Pearl!

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  5. Lovely poem of motherhood and nice use of alliteration and subtle rhyme.

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  6. I especially love the way you ended it.

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  7. Great imagery, use of colour and word choice. It is such a joy to read.

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  8. What a beautiful, insightful tribute to motherhood and the unbreakable bond that exists with her child.

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  9. This is lovely Pearl...well-woven use of the words as well

    http://thepoet-tree-house.blogspot.ca/2013/05/a-touch-of-gold.html

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  10. A lovely tale of the bond between mother and child.

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  11. Great job weaving all those words into this charming poem.

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  12. Aw, I love the tinkle of fairy breath. Wish I had that here. :) Very nicely done Pearl.

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  13. Absolutely lovely. This piece is endearing, Pearl. I love "the filamented timing of sudden sunny certainty."

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