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Thursday, March 22, 2012

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fielded

there she woke filaments
falling from her hair as she rose
elbows hugging knobby knees
and smiled
at the sun
breaking
free 

18 comments:

  1. Isn't is a wonderful thing too :)
    We have 22c here today. But, in Atlantic Canada and it seems impossible but they are forecasting SNOW again for Monday/Tuesday. Incredible!

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  2. At your suggestion, I edited my piece on the high of 'she is everywhere' I had wondered myself to add it or not, but, as you had picked up on it too, it seems I should have.
    Thank you :)

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  3. Ahhh it so fits the view of this photo
    Glorious imagery
    I especially love the hugging of her knees

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  4. This is as uplifting as the photo.......wonderful! And, by the way it is SNOWING here - again!~ Still! ARGH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    1. Interesting how intent and interpretation can be sooo different ... I am thrilled when that is the case... and by the way SNOW... OH NO! I can empathize with the ARGH Charlie Brown!

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  5. i like the photo, i like the words.

    thank you....

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    1. I like you stopping by, I like your directness

      thank you ...

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  6. Beautiful piece... and I love that picture, Pearl

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  7. Hi .. Thanks Laurie ! The photo is from today's Think Tank at Poet's United ... Exquisite isn't it?

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    1. In fact, going to do a little fact checking and credit it!

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  8. Oh what a lovely poem. And wouldn't it be something to awaken to that view!

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  9. Really cool style - love the imagery.

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  10. Yes. You painted her picture. She is me... and we.

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  11. to wake to the sun breaking free is to truly awaken. so very nice.

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