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Saturday, July 21, 2012

For Fabiola D'Antuono - It is all a carnival


For Fabiola D'Antuono




It is all a carnival
Is it not
The clowns
The lights
The ups
The downs


It is all a carnival
Is it not
The spun sugar
On your lips
The concentration
The gleeful slips


It is all a carnival
Is it not
On this revolving
cerrulean dot


It is all a carnival
Is it not 
And until closed
All we get to have got





7 comments:

  1. It IS all the most fantastical carnival. I love this!

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  2. Oh Sherry - Thank you - I'm editing an anthology and getting ready for a vacation - so tired that I actually forgot when I was leaving for four days - thought I was leaving on Thursday (until last night) and realized I'm leaving Wednesday ... and so I must admit I posted this one early and was hoping that the "wordle box" would come up after midnight... I am delighted that you enjoyed :)

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  3. Hi
    like the idea of it "all" being a carnival :-)

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  4. You captured the spirit of carnival here, most definitely.

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  5. Pearl enjoyed the rhythm like a spinning ride and the cerulean dot! Well done :-)

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  6. I like how you made me feel like I was twirling! Yes, you captured this swirly vision so well! :D

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  7. it is all a carnival, it is! i like this very much, the revolution in the words and the reflection. :) x

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