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Four-Year- Old-Murdered-Kaitlin. ( reposted for Poets United)

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Labels: Kaitlin Saturday, September 25,
Sunday, July 25, 2010

FOUR-YEAR-OLD-KAITLIN JONES (reposted for Poets United)

The body of four year old Kaitlin Jones found today
Mutilated, raped, and murdered in unknown order
Kaitlin had been missing for three weeks
Police had called in the FBI after an Amber Alert failed and no leads uncovered
A search party had been organized by friends and family
Her mother screamed when night fell and Kaitlin was not found
It had been expected the strong-willed little girl was hiding
Kaitlin had been under the care of Dr. Goode, PhD and categorized as
oppositional defiant
Her grandfather thought she was just a little girl who knew what
she did and did not want
But even he had to agree that something was wrong when Kaitlin was not found in any
of her secret places where she often stayed for hours on
her own
The family was never under suspicion of any foul play
Neighbors responded to the mother’s screams, coming together
in their nightclothes
Making coffee, flyers and organizing search parties, some brought their untrained dogs on long leashes, others stayed with the family
keeping up a stream of platitudes
The day Kaitlin disappeared she had been given
a peanut butter and jelly sandwich
with the crusts on and the jelly rather than the peanut butter on top
Kaitlin had fallen to the floor shocking the new baby-sitter with her
melt-down
A moment later she ran from the kitchen into her room and slammed the door


Kaitlin’s room was on the ground floor
In case of such a melt-down, the baby-sitter had been instructed to let Kaitlin “be”

No one noticed four-year-old Kaitlin climb from her window
and drop
to the ground
Where she ran across the field toward the wooded
hiking trail that snaked into the woods
Along the highway unseen but heard
rushing in the distance
beyond the trees
Where a young man had parked his car, walked for a while and waited for
something to happen - Like
a four-year-old girl who didn’t like her peanut butter and jelly sandwich

(note: for those not familiar with the "inverted pyramid form the most important details are in the first lines moving in descending level of consequence)
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7 comments:

  1. Hello Pearl. I came by to say thank you for visiting my blog and leaving such a lovely comment.

    This is a very powerful, moving piece of poetry.

    When will those people be put to death? I truly believe there's no prospect of rehabilitation for those monsters, nor should there be. An unforgivable crime, in my opinion.

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  2. Pearl~ Well-written and very moving poem (I like inverted pyramid) on such a horrendous subject.

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  3. Hello there Paul

    Oh my! I obviously inadvertently misled you.... Apologies!
    Kaitlin is fictional and not based on any particular case.... Although, tragically such horrific events are not always creations....!
    Thank you for your comment.... This character as I wrote over at Poets United just came to me ....there are 12 other Kaitlin poems which evolved into a short novel about Kaitlin's mother and her struggle with " Waiting For Kaitlin"....
    Your site is truly beautiful....thanks for visiting here.

    PKP

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  4. Thanks Laurie ... This was inspired by a PA prompt...and you my NaNoWrIMo buddy know about that November writing challenge! Thanks for the visit!

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  5. This is a truly chilling piece. Well done!

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