tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post961496831317038548..comments2024-03-16T16:53:50.429-07:00Comments on Imagine: Out of the damp Dr. Pearl Ketover Prilik (PKP)http://www.blogger.com/profile/15506538737806033824noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-63235141942242848362012-09-25T14:48:01.544-07:002012-09-25T14:48:01.544-07:00I so enjoyed this read - it offers itself to that ...I so enjoyed this read - it offers itself to that funny (eerie) bone of life and to the finality of that grin.Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-47136582147506434862012-09-24T08:21:20.892-07:002012-09-24T08:21:20.892-07:00Thanks Madame Ghoul :)Thanks Madame Ghoul :)Dr. Pearl Ketover Prilik (PKP)https://www.blogger.com/profile/15506538737806033824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-86729527728890776472012-09-24T07:46:24.687-07:002012-09-24T07:46:24.687-07:00love the macabre humor in this, and your rhymes we...love the macabre humor in this, and your rhymes were delightful.....can you tell I am a ghoul? loljoannehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18255189465024912528noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-33334064903286204732012-09-24T01:05:48.079-07:002012-09-24T01:05:48.079-07:00Unexpected ending indeed!
Anna :o]Unexpected ending indeed!<br /><br />Anna :o]hyperCRYPTICalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11967085628384237933noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-12894017901359439352012-09-23T15:41:09.926-07:002012-09-23T15:41:09.926-07:00Hello dear fellow "wordlers" ... I deepl...Hello dear fellow "wordlers" ... I deeply, deeply appreciate your stopping by and your comments and will visit those I have missed in turn. I did intend this one to be a bit of dark humor... a little naughty play on "ash" and this bored toiling woman's "-ss" never quite getting out of town...A joke, that needs to be explained is not very effective :( On the other hand a poem is not quite a joke and I am always, always delighted in the ways in which the words that come to me from who knows where are interpreted by those who honor me with their reading and comments! THANK YOU ONE AND ALL AGAIN!!! :)<br /> <br />In fact I started to rewrite the last two lines (see below) to be a bit more clear about my intentions but left the original intact.... <br /> <br />*************<br />alternate last lines<br /><br />Her eyes were still closed, never reached fifty when she'd leave as she had planned instead disappearing into the air so suddenly thin<br /><br />Promptly incinerated - her 'ash' did remain left forever behind - but at least she was spread into a wide open grin <br />Dr. Pearl Ketover Prilik (PKP)https://www.blogger.com/profile/15506538737806033824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-76307886764217589902012-09-23T13:59:56.276-07:002012-09-23T13:59:56.276-07:00Wow! As the others have said, Pearl. Unexpected en...Wow! As the others have said, Pearl. Unexpected ending.<br /><br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-3140161487683952632012-09-23T13:40:27.688-07:002012-09-23T13:40:27.688-07:00Whew - thought I blew the humour - glad you enjo...Whew - thought I blew the humour - glad you enjoyed :)Dr. Pearl Ketover Prilik (PKP)https://www.blogger.com/profile/15506538737806033824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-130656171430246272012-09-23T13:32:19.535-07:002012-09-23T13:32:19.535-07:00I really liked 'fire-bolts sang' - a stagg...I really liked 'fire-bolts sang' - a staggering punch line ending! <br /><br />I'm here:<br />http://julesgemsandstuff.blogspot.com/2012/09/sunday-whirl-75-nuts-and-bolts.htmlJuleshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00571987715911379165noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-10871938949314733982012-09-23T12:35:30.877-07:002012-09-23T12:35:30.877-07:00This is blackly humorous - at least to me - there ...This is blackly humorous - at least to me - there are lots of worse ways to end, I think, then in a wide-spread ash grin ...<br />nice finale to a trudging life.<br /><br />http://seingrahamsays.wordpress.com/2012/09/22/releasing-an-angel/S.E.Ingrahamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02135141369161538082noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-90018122589526165762012-09-23T08:22:41.506-07:002012-09-23T08:22:41.506-07:00I didn't see that last line coming!I didn't see that last line coming!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-86606138519645897292012-09-23T08:18:37.854-07:002012-09-23T08:18:37.854-07:00Deliberate self-destruction, and that with a grin....Deliberate self-destruction, and that with a grin. Very well-written.<br /><br />Elizabeth<br />http://soulsmusic.wordpress.com/2012/09/23/darkening-echo/Elizabethhttp://soulsmusic.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-85163896921989869422012-09-23T06:34:11.453-07:002012-09-23T06:34:11.453-07:00I love this one, Pearl. I thought the words might...I love this one, Pearl. I thought the words might lead some of us into darkness, but I never imagined a wide spread ash grin. Whatever remains will be blown away in the wind. :)brenda whttp://undercaws.com/2012/09/22/teenage-vitriol-viewed-from-50/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-22812941690259067622012-09-23T05:02:02.295-07:002012-09-23T05:02:02.295-07:00Oh, nice one, Pearl! :DOh, nice one, Pearl! :DAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-41103538267908720032012-09-23T04:58:57.082-07:002012-09-23T04:58:57.082-07:00Yikes! This is amazing...especially that last lin...Yikes! This is amazing...especially that last line. Excellent!Gloriahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08555391165844772063noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-82152835496546345172012-09-23T04:47:07.319-07:002012-09-23T04:47:07.319-07:00Perhaps a quick enidng is best? Perhaps a quick enidng is best? annell4https://www.blogger.com/profile/07629830133868270690noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-90534617876862075232012-09-23T01:58:31.935-07:002012-09-23T01:58:31.935-07:00Wow! you took that one to the limit. The last lin...Wow! you took that one to the limit. The last line is pure horror story, and very visual. Clever writing.vivinfrancehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07388722600118753457noreply@blogger.com