tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post9027184442544734495..comments2024-03-28T12:15:53.050-07:00Comments on Imagine: RumbledDr. Pearl Ketover Prilik (PKP)http://www.blogger.com/profile/15506538737806033824noreply@blogger.comBlogger24125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-79804696346837996182013-06-05T08:13:06.348-07:002013-06-05T08:13:06.348-07:00This fabulous it really appealed to my senses, it ...This fabulous it really appealed to my senses, it wasn't just that I could visualize but I could really feel the words. Wonderful ending =)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-64878857960175117352013-06-03T19:49:27.557-07:002013-06-03T19:49:27.557-07:00Love the imagery of the first few lines :) It took...Love the imagery of the first few lines :) It took me there!Vuong Phamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00815992320327264001noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-16180794424840079722013-06-03T18:01:29.973-07:002013-06-03T18:01:29.973-07:00What a great story! Happy ending with them presse...What a great story! Happy ending with them pressed together at last, finished with letters and internet touch being the only way to communicate. I really like this.Carol Steel https://www.blogger.com/profile/01331628292567383426noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-83667501789708339352013-06-03T12:03:07.918-07:002013-06-03T12:03:07.918-07:00beautiful poem - love the final coda: such a great...beautiful poem - love the final coda: such a great "rounding". Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-23298462253374712372013-06-02T19:00:51.593-07:002013-06-02T19:00:51.593-07:00Oh, lovely and romantic....and happy! I can see th...Oh, lovely and romantic....and happy! I can see them!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-72379152015027526412013-06-02T18:07:41.745-07:002013-06-02T18:07:41.745-07:00...now that's quite a journey t'wards that......now that's quite a journey t'wards that long sought communion... i am glad they did find a way to meet... loved it... smiles...kelvin s.m.https://www.blogger.com/profile/02591849636814413110noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-41126098270806730982013-06-02T17:24:40.592-07:002013-06-02T17:24:40.592-07:00That fearful anticipation ending in joy what a stu...That fearful anticipation ending in joy what a stunning piece of imagery.Old Egghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14727444489103758018noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-23798792196232089082013-06-02T17:08:45.948-07:002013-06-02T17:08:45.948-07:00Your words suggest much to the senses and layers o...Your words suggest much to the senses and layers of imagery. I too like the title. What follows is intriguing,<br /><br />Elizabeth<br />http://soulsmusic.wordpress.com/2013/06/02/awakening-a-body-once-living/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-70744823873627128342013-06-02T14:27:57.269-07:002013-06-02T14:27:57.269-07:00A timeless and romantic piece, really wonderful.A timeless and romantic piece, really wonderful.Lisa Williamshttp://law-poetry.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-26234579538968546732013-06-02T14:10:06.823-07:002013-06-02T14:10:06.823-07:00Quite a train ride... and a surprise at the end of...Quite a train ride... and a surprise at the end of the ride! WabiSabihttp://wabisabipoet.wordpress.com/2013/06/02/flying/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-64978499874232898722013-06-02T09:14:50.697-07:002013-06-02T09:14:50.697-07:00I like it....makes me think of the end of the war....I like it....makes me think of the end of the war...?annell4https://www.blogger.com/profile/07629830133868270690noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-77879786346072537222013-06-02T09:11:33.079-07:002013-06-02T09:11:33.079-07:00This is a great, vivid ride, Pearl. This is a great, vivid ride, Pearl. De Jacksonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04798544585779003567noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-63819337217406369212013-06-02T09:04:08.946-07:002013-06-02T09:04:08.946-07:00Trains are great when they bring somebody closer.....Trains are great when they bring somebody closer...Jinksyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01686101468214361004noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-78203414719226975122013-06-02T07:00:50.080-07:002013-06-02T07:00:50.080-07:00Wow- masterfully done. These hearts can take us to...Wow- masterfully done. These hearts can take us to dangerous places.terihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01348440908615750286noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-41002283726541844932013-06-02T06:53:35.967-07:002013-06-02T06:53:35.967-07:00The sky diver image surprised me, and I liked it. ...The sky diver image surprised me, and I liked it. Also like "pressed each to each." There are many ways to read this one. Nicely done.brenda whttp://undercaws.com/2013/06/01/august-will-come-and-you-will-go/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-33903880577945637392013-06-02T06:15:27.307-07:002013-06-02T06:15:27.307-07:00first, i love the image of the train...i grew up a...first, i love the image of the train...i grew up around them and fell asleep to their calls..as much as the story you unfold in the after...the desire finally sated in their meeting...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-72149912723174659032013-06-02T05:48:09.231-07:002013-06-02T05:48:09.231-07:00Their days of letters and virtual touch
Ended
Suc...Their days of letters and virtual touch<br />Ended <br />Such a sad endingAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13318991328136593536noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-51397991012098686382013-06-02T05:28:39.070-07:002013-06-02T05:28:39.070-07:00A long ride back home!! Return from call of duty i...A long ride back home!! Return from call of duty into the waiting arms of the beloved!! Nankahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05428694673909046094noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-90487290856513568422013-06-02T05:04:29.912-07:002013-06-02T05:04:29.912-07:00I like this: "here as dust begins" ... A...I like this: "here as dust begins" ... And also the one-word title.henna inkhttp://fadinghennaink.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-76377645460530245682013-06-02T04:47:01.052-07:002013-06-02T04:47:01.052-07:00Hi Mary - thanks for the lovely comment ... I do h...Hi Mary - thanks for the lovely comment ... I do hope your comment was sent out generally and not a personal missive and I do make it my business to wake early and respond before going back to my Sunday "sleep-in" :) Enjoy the day and thanks for visiting :)Dr. Pearl Ketover Prilik (PKP)https://www.blogger.com/profile/15506538737806033824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-47930763295023447702013-06-02T04:38:47.714-07:002013-06-02T04:38:47.714-07:00"In longing, in lust, perhaps in love" -..."In longing, in lust, perhaps in love" - hard to honestly separate sometimes.J Cosmo Newberyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04459976320205444628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-9011095228250482762013-06-02T04:36:16.353-07:002013-06-02T04:36:16.353-07:00Love lorn ....Love lorn ....Vandana Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10270400982093787158noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-46151692462828769072013-06-02T04:16:03.146-07:002013-06-02T04:16:03.146-07:00Hi Pearl, I hope you will be able to visit other ...Hi Pearl, I hope you will be able to visit other poets this week. It seems many have decided to post links but not visit. It brings down morale when SO many do this week after week. Thank you.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-14388318813460003632013-06-02T04:14:54.865-07:002013-06-02T04:14:54.865-07:00I love the picture you painted with this scene, Pe...I love the picture you painted with this scene, Pearl. Wonderful wordings, and a surprising ending!<br /><br />Thank you for taking part in Poets United Poetry Pantry!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.com