tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post8862216722549297213..comments2024-03-27T18:30:58.662-07:00Comments on Imagine: Springs Eternal Dr. Pearl Ketover Prilik (PKP)http://www.blogger.com/profile/15506538737806033824noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-53784322789030954132013-08-31T20:36:17.739-07:002013-08-31T20:36:17.739-07:00Incredible creation, Dr. P. Love this.Incredible creation, Dr. P. Love this.Sara McNultyhttp://purplepeninportland.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-8020558176259718962013-08-27T20:07:53.738-07:002013-08-27T20:07:53.738-07:00This made me think of anticipatory grief--that cer...This made me think of anticipatory grief--that certain knowledge/realization that some day we will lose what is most dear to us. Nicely done.Victoriahttp://liv2write2day.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-6338050393637675672013-08-27T02:08:59.959-07:002013-08-27T02:08:59.959-07:00"Bitter Springs" is a wonderful name (al..."Bitter Springs" is a wonderful name (although I see that others have said the same!), and such a tale of humanity you've etched for us. Love it, Pearl.<br /><br />~ Misky xxMiskyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03290945518598423297noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-14974525743471903522013-08-26T06:27:53.410-07:002013-08-26T06:27:53.410-07:00I envisioned an Old West theme, but veered into &...I envisioned an Old West theme, but veered into "Midwest dust bowl". You did it better than I had imagined. Bitter Springs is a great name for a place so desolate! You capture these words nicely! Glad I found your blog, Pearl. Your work is scintillating!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13980610386630622755noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-12736023965138462182013-08-25T17:00:13.774-07:002013-08-25T17:00:13.774-07:00Yes, the train whistle is much like the sound of p...Yes, the train whistle is much like the sound of passing dread. We used to live close to the rail track and there is nothing more comforting than to hold on to the one you love as that timeless warning is sounded. A beautiful piece of writing.Old Egghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14727444489103758018noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-62841895634023966822013-08-25T15:13:48.701-07:002013-08-25T15:13:48.701-07:00lovely! i am about to attempt my Sunday Whirl too...lovely! i am about to attempt my Sunday Whirl too. i hope you consider submitting a poem to Pilgrims one day. (http://www.pilgrimspoem.com) BYYhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11946777661226248886noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-78581836320533384542013-08-25T15:09:59.024-07:002013-08-25T15:09:59.024-07:00heart ache, heart break; wow! have a nice Sunday
...heart ache, heart break; wow! have a nice Sunday<br /><br /><br />much love... Gillena Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09191865405561549074noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-16332700226471502752013-08-25T13:38:29.680-07:002013-08-25T13:38:29.680-07:00Very nice! I especially liked the last five lines...Very nice! I especially liked the last five lines.daphnepurpushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05337076348490404223noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-67314072516247473302013-08-25T12:40:02.441-07:002013-08-25T12:40:02.441-07:00Intriguing write. Love the name Bitter Springs - i...Intriguing write. Love the name Bitter Springs - it seems very apt!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-4589219902376339652013-08-25T12:37:53.436-07:002013-08-25T12:37:53.436-07:00"Bitter Springs!" That sums it up nicely..."Bitter Springs!" That sums it up nicely!Marianvhttp://marianv.blog.co.uknoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-68202204748801087282013-08-25T09:15:03.474-07:002013-08-25T09:15:03.474-07:00
nicely done......<br />nicely done......Sumana Royhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17333363799083094084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-48262958728375790112013-08-25T09:09:36.250-07:002013-08-25T09:09:36.250-07:00You've created such a vivid place in the '...You've created such a vivid place in the 'shimmering keep of dreams.' Nice use of the prompt words!WabiSabihttp://wabisabipoet.wordpress.com/2013/08/24/many-conversations-a-haibun/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-79435958191211839282013-08-25T09:00:59.803-07:002013-08-25T09:00:59.803-07:00life too is like season, changes everytimelife too is like season, changes everytimeVandana Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10270400982093787158noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-31234212184476391572013-08-25T08:30:12.255-07:002013-08-25T08:30:12.255-07:00"Locked in fierce filters of forever
Clutchin..."Locked in fierce filters of forever<br />Clutching each other in the sudden chill" <br /><br />Pearl, that is stunning. Sounds foreboding, yet there is safety there as well. Well done.<br /><br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-87018797690173243662013-08-25T06:15:43.809-07:002013-08-25T06:15:43.809-07:00Sounds like Bitter Springs has some interesting hi...Sounds like Bitter Springs has some interesting history...Stan Skihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11963655096635414472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-5088457324342942812013-08-25T06:11:21.443-07:002013-08-25T06:11:21.443-07:00I have to say that Bitter Springs sounds like a pl...I have to say that Bitter Springs sounds like a place I would rather not visit!Magical Mystical Teacherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01853272111925075994noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-11949288143676980602013-08-25T05:28:49.055-07:002013-08-25T05:28:49.055-07:00"shimmering keep of dreams," Nicely don..."shimmering keep of dreams," Nicely done!annell4https://www.blogger.com/profile/07629830133868270690noreply@blogger.com