tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post8702701536592947091..comments2024-03-28T03:14:14.588-07:00Comments on Imagine: Clearing The AirDr. Pearl Ketover Prilik (PKP)http://www.blogger.com/profile/15506538737806033824noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-43974783700325795292012-05-31T06:58:32.165-07:002012-05-31T06:58:32.165-07:00letting it all out sometimes brings clarity.
very...letting it all out sometimes brings clarity.<br /><br />very good. the cleansing with words is so beautiful.the wild magnoliahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14355836751549469688noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-34466488683150592392012-05-28T23:36:48.407-07:002012-05-28T23:36:48.407-07:00Beautiful use of language. Really good job!Beautiful use of language. Really good job!Madeleine Begun Kanehttp://www.madkane.com/humor_blog/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-69583386325031241242012-05-28T19:43:38.653-07:002012-05-28T19:43:38.653-07:00This is amazing, Pearl.This is amazing, Pearl.Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-90695909330207607892012-05-28T15:01:25.394-07:002012-05-28T15:01:25.394-07:00Hi all ... actually my son was able to get this po...Hi all ... actually my son was able to get this posted for me... :) <br />Thank you all collectively for your wonderful comments and for stopping by - will get to each individually :)Dr. Pearl Ketover Prilik (PKP)https://www.blogger.com/profile/15506538737806033824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-33455214010391779392012-05-28T11:03:54.367-07:002012-05-28T11:03:54.367-07:00I like how this is one very vividly painted moment...I like how this is one very vividly painted moment. Nice brush strokes, too.Elliot MacLeod-Michaelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03101422996950773526noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-2280628978079795842012-05-28T06:38:03.474-07:002012-05-28T06:38:03.474-07:00LOVE "raised fist of morning sun," Pearl...LOVE "raised fist of morning sun," Pearl. Excellent!De Jacksonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04798544585779003567noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-38486977663272643552012-05-28T05:09:29.856-07:002012-05-28T05:09:29.856-07:00"flinty gaze of unvarnished truth,
the cocoon..."flinty gaze of unvarnished truth,<br />the cocoon of brittle denial<br />cracked, gave way, and with<br />the scrape of tongue,"<br /><br />Beautiful lines!<br /><br /><a href="http://firmlyrooted.blogspot.in/2012/05/discontent.html" rel="nofollow">discontent</a>gautami tripathyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-49562835332855460112012-05-28T04:04:53.184-07:002012-05-28T04:04:53.184-07:00Pearl, this is wonderful!
PamelaPearl, this is wonderful!<br /><br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-29130276365025795012012-05-28T02:05:44.379-07:002012-05-28T02:05:44.379-07:00I love the way the ship finally broke free of its ...I love the way the ship finally broke free of its ties and set sail for a blue horizon. The 'blur of burnished barnacles' was quite a line :)<br />I liked both versions.Daydreamertoohttp://daydreamertoo.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-13368395787325492642012-05-28T01:15:59.804-07:002012-05-28T01:15:59.804-07:00Remarkable use of imagery and metaphor. The last t...Remarkable use of imagery and metaphor. The last two lines reminded me of the song 'Chasing Pirates' by Norah Jones. Well written. Keep it up! :)Preeti S.https://www.blogger.com/profile/08367363156339655332noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-25913824999867584112012-05-27T22:07:01.705-07:002012-05-27T22:07:01.705-07:00S.E.IngrahamMay 27, 2012 3:36 PM
You do have way w...S.E.IngrahamMay 27, 2012 3:36 PM<br />You do have way with words ... this is imaginative and unique; lovely weaving of the wordle words; I particular enjoy "the raised fist of morning" which is pretty much how I expect to see it every day!<br /><br />http://thepoet-tree-house.blogspot.ca/2012/05/reminiscing-before-selling-family-home.html<br /><br />ReplyDeleteDr. Pearl Ketover Prilik (PKP)https://www.blogger.com/profile/15506538737806033824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-20776298548747722702012-05-27T22:06:44.662-07:002012-05-27T22:06:44.662-07:00brenda wMay 27, 2012 7:10 AM
This is full of beaut...brenda wMay 27, 2012 7:10 AM<br />This is full of beautiful imagery, Pearl. I love your description of dawn. Well wordled!<br /><br />ReplyDelete<br /><br />awakenedwordsMay 27, 2012 8:59 AM<br />'as powder chalk in the austere' loved that<br /><br />ReplyDelete<br /><br />CherylMay 27, 2012 10:19 AM<br />"Raised fist of morning sun" is incredible. You blow me away!<br /><br />ReplyDelete<br /><br />JulesMay 27, 2012 10:38 AM<br />Sometimes computers just don't play fair. I made my hubby laugh this morning as I am not a techie (I'm just a blogger) and he is...Help I cried, "There's a flashing thingy on my screen!" To which he replied, "Love that technical term, dear!" <br /><br />No apologies needed for machines. Hope to see the form, eventually. My offering has 'form' too. You can find it here:<br />http://julesgemsandstuff.blogspot.com/2012/05/lasting-last-laughs-sunday-whirl-58.html<br /><br />ReplyDeleteDr. Pearl Ketover Prilik (PKP)https://www.blogger.com/profile/15506538737806033824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-80499392250423003322012-05-27T22:06:06.843-07:002012-05-27T22:06:06.843-07:00Traci BMay 27, 2012 6:27 AM
Beautiful! Gave me goo...Traci BMay 27, 2012 6:27 AM<br />Beautiful! Gave me goosbumps reading that flight to freedom. :)<br /><br />ReplyDeleteDr. Pearl Ketover Prilik (PKP)https://www.blogger.com/profile/15506538737806033824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-70339845222689819882012-05-27T22:05:32.644-07:002012-05-27T22:05:32.644-07:00Posted by Dr. Pearl Ketover Prilik (PKP) at 5:27 A...Posted by Dr. Pearl Ketover Prilik (PKP) at 5:27 AM <br /><br /><br />Dr. Pearl Ketover Prilik (PKP)May 27, 2012 6:19 AM<br />Apologies IPAD not permitting correct formatting today...I am away .. Enjoy the day :)Dr. Pearl Ketover Prilik (PKP)https://www.blogger.com/profile/15506538737806033824noreply@blogger.com