tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post8264866123830379436..comments2024-03-28T18:04:58.688-07:00Comments on Imagine: Spread EagledDr. Pearl Ketover Prilik (PKP)http://www.blogger.com/profile/15506538737806033824noreply@blogger.comBlogger24125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-55646877935709557152014-12-18T04:39:01.097-08:002014-12-18T04:39:01.097-08:00I liked the idea of "lost loser"I liked the idea of "lost loser"Locomentehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16891335111277665181noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-43537350322937166302014-12-15T11:10:31.908-08:002014-12-15T11:10:31.908-08:00powerful, painful, relationships can lift us up or...powerful, painful, relationships can lift us up or weigh us down… either way there is and entanglement, sometimes it is unclear who is pulling or pushing, lifting or sinking whom.Laurahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15349928247626849914noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-63475242837906645322014-12-14T20:25:55.808-08:002014-12-14T20:25:55.808-08:00Pearl...this is lovely, passionate..so poignantly ...Pearl...this is lovely, passionate..so poignantly penned and I love the alliteration woven throughout.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-43168030025468241642014-12-14T20:25:11.500-08:002014-12-14T20:25:11.500-08:00Whew - this chilled me through and through...well-...Whew - this chilled me through and through...well-written as always...alliterative to the nth degree...I am awed.<br /><br />http://thepoet-tree-house.blogspot.ca/2014/12/come-they-close.htmlS.E.Ingrahamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02135141369161538082noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-65010944437648843062014-12-14T14:40:44.666-08:002014-12-14T14:40:44.666-08:00Some times its best to get out.Some times its best to get out.Gen Giggles https://www.blogger.com/profile/13744815023509063722noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-47669452798823314772014-12-14T09:07:48.375-08:002014-12-14T09:07:48.375-08:00Blazing with emotion. It read, to me, like the car...Blazing with emotion. It read, to me, like the caregiver of someone with dementia, who is steadfast, obligated to endure the cycles of rage and volatile emotions. A difficult situation, which you have captured to perfection.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-20974300235168045772014-12-14T07:05:25.835-08:002014-12-14T07:05:25.835-08:00Love that! Tangle of love!Love that! Tangle of love!annell4https://www.blogger.com/profile/07629830133868270690noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-10365122572301193012014-12-14T06:47:19.475-08:002014-12-14T06:47:19.475-08:00a lovely write, the ill effects to climate and ozo...a lovely write, the ill effects to climate and ozones layers is indeed sad; wish there were more happy solutions to explorations<br /><br />have a beautiful Sunday<br /><br />much love...Gillena Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09191865405561549074noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-76381068323033632692014-12-14T06:31:51.143-08:002014-12-14T06:31:51.143-08:00Very powerful words and images but I particularly ...Very powerful words and images but I particularly like the use of the repetition that frames your poem.Gabriellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09968615376035959259noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-16205887502408206282014-12-14T06:17:42.798-08:002014-12-14T06:17:42.798-08:00Beautifully wordled. You've pulled meaning fr...Beautifully wordled. You've pulled meaning from those disparate words.vivinfrancehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07388722600118753457noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-21744608508966514282014-12-14T06:13:09.217-08:002014-12-14T06:13:09.217-08:00Amazing sometimes really that what is called '...Amazing sometimes really that what is called 'love' is not loving at all. But still oftentimes one stays in such painful 'tangles.'Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-85384812267947663522014-12-14T05:48:06.416-08:002014-12-14T05:48:06.416-08:00Whew! Your piece certainly carries us into that &q...Whew! Your piece certainly carries us into that "tangle of lunatic love"...I think I'll get off here :-) Well written and I liked the form you put it in.<br />ZQZQhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08521836993023109556noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-76859211121672606612014-12-14T05:03:14.670-08:002014-12-14T05:03:14.670-08:00it wasn't frustration after all... it was pati...it wasn't frustration after all... it was patience and understanding in love... totomaihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01805083472267649276noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-48389792919078653062014-12-14T04:30:07.126-08:002014-12-14T04:30:07.126-08:00Strong emotions felt deeply leading me as I could ...Strong emotions felt deeply leading me as I could not stop until I came to the end...so much meaning...Donna@LivingFromHappinesshttp://www.livingfromhappiness.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-90043931013100708652014-12-14T04:16:09.678-08:002014-12-14T04:16:09.678-08:00I had no idea where you were going with this poem ...I had no idea where you were going with this poem until I reached the surprising last word!<br /><br /><a href="http://magicalmysticalteacher.wordpress.com/2014/12/14/a-tiny-whirlwind/" rel="nofollow"><b>A Tiny Whirlwind</b></a>Magical Mystical Teacherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01853272111925075994noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-7253359946874935552014-12-14T03:13:44.632-08:002014-12-14T03:13:44.632-08:00What a clever piece Pearl...love is the tie that b...What a clever piece Pearl...love is the tie that binds...sometimes perhaps it can feel more like a choke hold than a comfy blanket...peaceful Sunday to youJae Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11509244123008832611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-48577242801865334342014-12-14T01:01:10.248-08:002014-12-14T01:01:10.248-08:00i really like how the reader ends up thinking of s...i really like how the reader ends up thinking of so many possibilities and then the subject is revealed. good styleSuyashJhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06332045821743367072noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-60858011629086555092014-12-14T00:29:47.131-08:002014-12-14T00:29:47.131-08:00More like a lunatic lottery, but how it drives us ...More like a lunatic lottery, but how it drives us on...and I love playing the game.Old Egghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14727444489103758018noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-71472859704258680522014-12-14T00:16:51.037-08:002014-12-14T00:16:51.037-08:00Such a deep diving inside a sea of love..............Such a deep diving inside a sea of love.............................................................................................................................................~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~`Vandana Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10270400982093787158noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-28596376582076815542014-12-14T00:14:48.983-08:002014-12-14T00:14:48.983-08:00Very powerful. I've been in such toxic relatio...Very powerful. I've been in such toxic relationships where I knew I would be better off without him but I stayed for fear of being alone. Sometimes being with someone is worse than being alone.<br />http://poetryofthenetherworld.blogspot.com/2014/12/forever-your-little-loser.htmlOrnery Owl of Naughty Netherworld Press and Readers Roost https://www.blogger.com/profile/07596105116325246476noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-42456606567500953622014-12-14T00:02:41.068-08:002014-12-14T00:02:41.068-08:00Yes .. This works so well, the technique of not me...Yes .. This works so well, the technique of not mentioning the subject till the very end made me focus so much more on the feeling n itself.. To name it love can always give it a label that make it impossible to focus in the meaning,brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-80108373807786954172014-12-13T22:58:09.167-08:002014-12-13T22:58:09.167-08:00Thanks Roslyn - Appreciate your stopping and delig...Thanks Roslyn - Appreciate your stopping and delighted that you were able to find something that resonated meaningfully for you. Dr. Pearl Ketover Prilik (PKP)https://www.blogger.com/profile/15506538737806033824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-33698718511653920392014-12-13T22:20:18.730-08:002014-12-13T22:20:18.730-08:00Wonderfully wrought. I had no problems finding mea...Wonderfully wrought. I had no problems finding meaning.Roslyn Rosshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15700960108357035957noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-64312042304366258642014-12-13T20:59:58.175-08:002014-12-13T20:59:58.175-08:00Striking images, palpable emotion, powerful writin...Striking images, palpable emotion, powerful writing as always ... yet I wish you had included some context, so the poem would be less mystifying for me. Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.com