tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post6422666902086182219..comments2024-03-28T12:15:53.050-07:00Comments on Imagine: Drive Out of StateDr. Pearl Ketover Prilik (PKP)http://www.blogger.com/profile/15506538737806033824noreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-88581871305956588612014-01-30T06:24:27.698-08:002014-01-30T06:24:27.698-08:00the family element breaking everywhere...why? inde...the family element breaking everywhere...why? indeed a sequel will be a greater poem, so truly expressed with a flow rhythm and pace in the lines-life is so shortAnjum Wasim Darhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01252859337697790445noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-44984026370070105542014-01-27T13:35:42.794-08:002014-01-27T13:35:42.794-08:00I lot of tears at the end of this one. A familiar ...I lot of tears at the end of this one. A familiar road for far to many . . .Stormcat Poetryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16684250269137492366noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-62793931128336807182014-01-27T12:52:25.526-08:002014-01-27T12:52:25.526-08:00This is so poignant, Pearl.
"with as much ro...This is so poignant, Pearl. <br />"with as much road behind them as<br />stretching ahead" <br /><br />Indeed. So true, always, in so many ways. Love this.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-74093009393326067482014-01-27T07:09:16.035-08:002014-01-27T07:09:16.035-08:00I like the ending. Nowhere, yet somewhere together...I like the ending. Nowhere, yet somewhere together. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13318991328136593536noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-4760733172569577812014-01-27T00:57:33.088-08:002014-01-27T00:57:33.088-08:00It is not quite a good feeling when a destination ...It is not quite a good feeling when a destination is not ascertained. A journey to no where is a journey unfulfilled. Great write Dr Pearl!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-48721105397171424882014-01-26T23:55:07.427-08:002014-01-26T23:55:07.427-08:00A wonderful story-telling poem: the visual imager...A wonderful story-telling poem: the visual imagery made it all very real for me.vivinfrancehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07388722600118753457noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-48667586769334498652014-01-26T18:47:01.436-08:002014-01-26T18:47:01.436-08:00Your whole poem rests on that one last word. An un...Your whole poem rests on that one last word. An unexpected twist, a surprise, slammed home with a mountain of feelings. Really good writing Pearl,<br /><br />ElizabethAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-9968523415053129322014-01-26T14:38:48.906-08:002014-01-26T14:38:48.906-08:00much captured in few words; life, despair, tragedy...much captured in few words; life, despair, tragedy...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-60880717738260007602014-01-26T14:26:14.356-08:002014-01-26T14:26:14.356-08:00Yikes! How can they even think such a thing when t...Yikes! How can they even think such a thing when they have a beautiful child?! This is too sad!!Belva Rae Stapleshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16018806071465719524noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-82549797254213586342014-01-26T12:50:16.423-08:002014-01-26T12:50:16.423-08:00Gosh, this is such a heartbreaking poem, and unfor...Gosh, this is such a heartbreaking poem, and unfortunately, felt by many young couples nowadays.Miskyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03290945518598423297noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-48310482215276887392014-01-26T11:45:58.330-08:002014-01-26T11:45:58.330-08:00Intriguing write, Pearl. It leaves the reader wond...Intriguing write, Pearl. It leaves the reader wondering what happens next.<br /><br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-59785637218685511922014-01-26T10:22:17.157-08:002014-01-26T10:22:17.157-08:00A journey beautifully concluded Pearl - great work...A journey beautifully concluded Pearl - great work... With Best Wishes Scott www.scotthastiue.comscotthastiepoethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17266153714529613752noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-52696496662800788642014-01-26T08:35:53.824-08:002014-01-26T08:35:53.824-08:00Whoa. This is exactly what that situation is like....Whoa. This is exactly what that situation is like. Though these two had more awareness than some and didnt drag it on for years.......the "nowhere' at the end is the perfect word. Poor baby girl!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-24558976044045440292014-01-26T07:04:04.803-08:002014-01-26T07:04:04.803-08:00Wow, Pearl. You wrote the life of these two peopl...Wow, Pearl. You wrote the life of these two people very well. Sad that they married in the first place really. Now what will they do, I wonder, now that they both realize they are heading nowhere. Sad especially for the baby. This poem needs a sequel.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-79005241516236651942014-01-26T06:16:00.012-08:002014-01-26T06:16:00.012-08:00Yes that end line really does leave you hanging..m...Yes that end line really does leave you hanging..maybe all roads lead to nowhere though and life lies with the people in the car..I hope!Jae Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11509244123008832611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-37705338709735486492014-01-26T05:49:38.227-08:002014-01-26T05:49:38.227-08:00hummmm.....slice of life, what happens next, witho...hummmm.....slice of life, what happens next, without number....annell4https://www.blogger.com/profile/07629830133868270690noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-32280330635964357422014-01-26T05:20:04.489-08:002014-01-26T05:20:04.489-08:00Oh my Laurie - I too hope not ... Thanks for stopp...Oh my Laurie - I too hope not ... Thanks for stopping and commenting - you know it is always appreciated Dr. Pearl Ketover Prilik (PKP)https://www.blogger.com/profile/15506538737806033824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-39388112078357089482014-01-26T05:16:55.353-08:002014-01-26T05:16:55.353-08:00Oh, Pearl... I hope they didn't do what I thin...Oh, Pearl... I hope they didn't do what I think they did! Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.com