tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post349334847185034052..comments2024-03-28T18:04:58.688-07:00Comments on Imagine: Unless Dr. Pearl Ketover Prilik (PKP)http://www.blogger.com/profile/15506538737806033824noreply@blogger.comBlogger21125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-37565508704054089552012-11-26T12:32:29.363-08:002012-11-26T12:32:29.363-08:00Wonderful!Wonderful!Anthony Hopperhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15708347177061466201noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-66292217231466556352012-11-23T04:50:19.599-08:002012-11-23T04:50:19.599-08:00Enjoyed your poem! The ending keeps me thinking of...Enjoyed your poem! The ending keeps me thinking of all different outcomes!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13318991328136593536noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-66014192741149606982012-11-20T15:43:26.093-08:002012-11-20T15:43:26.093-08:00Dr. P Very mysterious and beautifully written.Dr. P Very mysterious and beautifully written.Sara McNultyhttp://purplepeninportland.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-82825180602876824612012-11-19T19:39:40.808-08:002012-11-19T19:39:40.808-08:00Wonderful style and story.Wonderful style and story.Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-41750370005601948152012-11-19T16:38:28.609-08:002012-11-19T16:38:28.609-08:00oh, I hope they can forgive him what he's done...oh, I hope they can forgive him what he's done!Mama Pajamahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10278474039105398842noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-50384525452822725312012-11-19T03:41:31.798-08:002012-11-19T03:41:31.798-08:00Simply awe-inspiring, Pearl.Simply awe-inspiring, Pearl.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-3902915486617825552012-11-19T02:41:47.800-08:002012-11-19T02:41:47.800-08:00What an interesting take on the prompt! I read it ...What an interesting take on the prompt! I read it several times to fully taste it :-)Mariya Kolevahttp://phoenix-em.com/mariyakolevanoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-15529014509827586952012-11-18T23:40:06.866-08:002012-11-18T23:40:06.866-08:00Really good, and I especially loved this phrase: &...Really good, and I especially loved this phrase: "pawn ticket of their trust."Madeleine Begun Kanehttp://www.madkane.com/humor_blog/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-42343486532948342162012-11-18T21:14:53.490-08:002012-11-18T21:14:53.490-08:00Wonderful what you did with this.Wonderful what you did with this.Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-87137572280889240652012-11-18T17:04:41.571-08:002012-11-18T17:04:41.571-08:00I especially like your first four lines.I especially like your first four lines.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-67163429130999819992012-11-18T12:14:10.595-08:002012-11-18T12:14:10.595-08:00Yes, an interesting back-story there. Actually, y...Yes, an interesting back-story there. Actually, you could expand this into a longer piece. A treat to peek into your imagination!Marian Veverkahttp://marianv.blog.co.uknoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-76548095027501315932012-11-18T09:47:02.422-08:002012-11-18T09:47:02.422-08:00"stared at the pawn ticket of their trust&quo..."stared at the pawn ticket of their trust".....great line. Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-52771058585817780612012-11-18T09:17:58.949-08:002012-11-18T09:17:58.949-08:00Very interesting tale you tell, just enough detail...Very interesting tale you tell, just enough details to keep the reader in place, wondering, yet vivid enough to create images in the mind. <br /><br />Elizabeth<br />http://soulsmusic.wordpress.com/2012/11/18/burnt-sacrifice/Elizabethhttp://soulsmusic.wordpress.com/2012/11/18/burnt-sacrifice/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-81043712914543176522012-11-18T09:07:51.482-08:002012-11-18T09:07:51.482-08:00Whoa... that ending does make me wonder.. I know I...Whoa... that ending does make me wonder.. I know I'm not the first to say it, and I doubt I'll be the last either, because that was quite unexpected, and it worked. :) Lovely.<br /><br />er.. Sunday Whirl, Dr. Pearl? ;) Vinay Leo R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/13132856855570330824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-75597781481284829032012-11-18T08:56:33.874-08:002012-11-18T08:56:33.874-08:00Beautifully written, Pearl. The small boy is a st...Beautifully written, Pearl. The small boy is a strong image, lips trembling....brenda whttp://undercaws.com/2012/11/18/feeding-the-beast/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-27470208288714422372012-11-18T07:04:12.382-08:002012-11-18T07:04:12.382-08:00I am amazed at your facility in using all of the p...I am amazed at your facility in using all of the prompt words to create such a wonderful poem. I loved "the sweet round balloon of his being"<br />I must try this type of prompt. Where did this group of words come from?WabiSabihttp://wabisabipoet.wordpress.com/2012/11/17/reflections/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-18892030603875090762012-11-18T07:00:09.113-08:002012-11-18T07:00:09.113-08:00Oops, he got caught.....but a bit too late. I li...Oops, he got caught.....but a bit too late. I like the ending 'unless' which makes the reader ponder what then........ Well wordled.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-4810310361841205682012-11-18T06:21:47.029-08:002012-11-18T06:21:47.029-08:00Awww... I'm glad he saw the error of his ways....Awww... I'm glad he saw the error of his ways. Hope he wasn't abandoned by them and that they redeem the pawn ticket.<br />Really enjoyed this and yes, the final 'unless' ends it perfectly on a ... what happens next? <br />Daydreamertoohttp://daydreamertoo.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-58276559424140076962012-11-18T06:10:53.353-08:002012-11-18T06:10:53.353-08:00This comment has been removed by a blog administrator.Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-38208427876318809392012-11-18T05:39:59.331-08:002012-11-18T05:39:59.331-08:00Awww thank you Hannah - I had a little trouble wit...Awww thank you Hannah - I had a little trouble with this one - I am delighted that you enjoyed:)Dr. Pearl Ketover Prilik (PKP)https://www.blogger.com/profile/15506538737806033824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-68504576348038179942012-11-18T05:31:26.206-08:002012-11-18T05:31:26.206-08:00Oh my!! Pearl...your last stanza with that danglin...Oh my!! Pearl...your last stanza with that dangling "unless," love it!! Great write!!Hannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10124956200834969600noreply@blogger.com