tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post3227726315529924014..comments2024-03-28T18:04:58.688-07:00Comments on Imagine: Conscience Court Dr. Pearl Ketover Prilik (PKP)http://www.blogger.com/profile/15506538737806033824noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-89439842570312844392014-02-25T16:19:03.592-08:002014-02-25T16:19:03.592-08:00I love it, and it truly resonates... I am there w...I love it, and it truly resonates... I am there with you, dear Pearl, on the "real or imagined shore soaked in light seeking balance and balm..." In the "aqua water of a crystal sea..." By the "white sand of an again unwritten shore..." Thanks for the beautiful depiction.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01330699480856746284noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-78040209934819153942014-02-17T15:35:14.527-08:002014-02-17T15:35:14.527-08:00You describe well the swirl of thoughts that can c...You describe well the swirl of thoughts that can create whirlwinds in our minds.....and I love the closing lines, when they are restored to "lines of order tiptoeing in the tide, touching grace notes up and down <br />white sands of an again unwritten shore." Beautiful.<br />Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-89741040794582400962014-02-17T01:10:15.816-08:002014-02-17T01:10:15.816-08:00"Floating filaments of phantoms" how wel..."Floating filaments of phantoms" how well this read and how we all must strive for that unwritten shore. Great reading.Old Egghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14727444489103758018noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-22878460067022828552014-02-16T20:39:00.939-08:002014-02-16T20:39:00.939-08:00This is wonderful...does it have as many psycholog...This is wonderful...does it have as many psychological underpinnings and layers as it seems? The way my mind works, I find it running down those fairways so easily...In an case, it's delicious and delightful; your words and imagery, as always, are magic.<br /><br />http://thepoet-tree-house.blogspot.ca/2014/02/just-simple-working-girl.htmlS.E.Ingrahamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02135141369161538082noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-11724322799917435332014-02-16T13:02:16.986-08:002014-02-16T13:02:16.986-08:00Quite gorgeous, with a wonderful last three lines!...Quite gorgeous, with a wonderful last three lines!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-86551197333814178872014-02-16T11:57:32.239-08:002014-02-16T11:57:32.239-08:00Gorgeous piece, Pearl. Gorgeous piece, Pearl. Miskynoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-84326385796825674142014-02-16T10:28:54.995-08:002014-02-16T10:28:54.995-08:00gorgeous last lines… pulling it all together with ...gorgeous last lines… pulling it all together with grace.Laurahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15349928247626849914noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-5481862130191618382014-02-16T10:16:26.054-08:002014-02-16T10:16:26.054-08:00Wow, those were difficult words to use in one poem...Wow, those were difficult words to use in one poem, Pearl; but you accomplished it well. An interesting shape, and many good lines. I especially like the final three lines!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-16557500070230007122014-02-16T09:51:38.491-08:002014-02-16T09:51:38.491-08:00Gorgeous, soothing writing, Pearl. It starts with ...Gorgeous, soothing writing, Pearl. It starts with angst, then flows into a hopeful balm. brenda whttp://undercaws.com/2014/02/16/party-of-one/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-7577034722541108572014-02-16T09:06:38.710-08:002014-02-16T09:06:38.710-08:00This is lovely!This is lovely!Belva Rae Stapleshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16018806071465719524noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-70945360294409020732014-02-16T09:06:10.571-08:002014-02-16T09:06:10.571-08:00Love the idea of thoughts reassembling as cursive ...Love the idea of thoughts reassembling as cursive lines of order tiptoeing in the tide...Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-70431306413300853602014-02-16T09:05:41.919-08:002014-02-16T09:05:41.919-08:00Thoughts are difficult to quell..a nuisance and a ...Thoughts are difficult to quell..a nuisance and a blessing..sometimes stepping on the beach for a time out helps..for shore Jae Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11509244123008832611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-86848655271547487282014-02-16T07:49:39.276-08:002014-02-16T07:49:39.276-08:00Really beautiful! I love 'gentle cursive line...Really beautiful! I love 'gentle cursive lines of order tiptoeing in the tide!'annell4https://www.blogger.com/profile/07629830133868270690noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-62924844337659301532014-02-16T06:12:26.573-08:002014-02-16T06:12:26.573-08:00unwritten shores...........very deepunwritten shores...........very deepVandana Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10270400982093787158noreply@blogger.com