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Saturday, April 16, 2011

DAY 16 PA PROMPT - SNAPSHOT - Poem 1. Moment in the Sun

Moment In The Sun

Arched back
Lifted on lithe
arms
Hair brushes sand
Small waisted
Tight
Thighs to
Feet fingering
Sugared shore
Ribs ripple
Under full high
Breasts soft
On pulsing heart
In turquoise water's
Sun soaked time
at

4 comments:

  1. GloriaApril 16, 2011 at 3:58 PM

    You've painted a perfect picture for a summer's day at the beach.

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  2. Andy SewinaApril 16, 2011 at 7:03 PM

    I like the way you pared this back! Lovely description!!

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  3. Dr. Pearl Ketover Prilik (PKP)April 16, 2011 at 7:07 PM

    Thanks SWT! Over to take a look at you!

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  4. Dr. Pearl Ketover Prilik (PKP)April 20, 2011 at 9:44 AM

    Gloria... Thank you ...of course sheer memory and imagination at least in that rippled rib physicality!

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