tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post6794001330059593313..comments2024-03-28T18:04:58.688-07:00Comments on Imagine: CrackDr. Pearl Ketover Prilik (PKP)http://www.blogger.com/profile/15506538737806033824noreply@blogger.comBlogger20125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-34329251061853841542017-05-29T05:06:04.226-07:002017-05-29T05:06:04.226-07:00I loved the way you ended the poem. Inspiring inde...I loved the way you ended the poem. Inspiring indeed. Purba chakrabortyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10726789340791239305noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-74223794290033513292017-05-29T02:54:22.272-07:002017-05-29T02:54:22.272-07:00What a sad little poem. Breathe.What a sad little poem. Breathe.Keith's Ramblingshttp://keithsramblings.co.uknoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-23560713551522369122017-05-28T17:43:38.678-07:002017-05-28T17:43:38.678-07:00Well constructed solace Well constructed solace Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-86190346733167653122017-05-28T16:25:32.406-07:002017-05-28T16:25:32.406-07:00An impactful piece rendered in a mesmerizing form....An impactful piece rendered in a mesmerizing form. Wendy Bourkehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09475940407969993348noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-25895481242500968772017-05-28T16:04:49.136-07:002017-05-28T16:04:49.136-07:00To continue to breathe might be the greatest chall...To continue to breathe might be the greatest challenge of all...wonderful completion,<br /><br />ElizabethAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-6801728615901918892017-05-28T14:01:30.702-07:002017-05-28T14:01:30.702-07:00I love the form! and the reminder to breathe as we...I love the form! and the reminder to breathe as wellSuyashJhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06332045821743367072noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-42573888292266815392017-05-28T13:45:44.144-07:002017-05-28T13:45:44.144-07:00Such a powerful rendition!!Such a powerful rendition!!Sanaa Rizvihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06681404650477409830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-29519508203750610402017-05-28T10:09:07.779-07:002017-05-28T10:09:07.779-07:00I can see how that poor thing laying there... and ...I can see how that poor thing laying there... and that constriction making breathing hard.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-16326526550163517712017-05-28T09:44:07.327-07:002017-05-28T09:44:07.327-07:00I wonder if the crack will widen or heal itself as...I wonder if the crack will widen or heal itself as the breathing continues. I wonder, but do not have an answer.Magical Mystical Teacherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01853272111925075994noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-80190121054370849472017-05-28T09:38:08.946-07:002017-05-28T09:38:08.946-07:00"Small neck snapped" really got me. And ..."Small neck snapped" really got me. And the dread of the seep. colleenhttp://looseleafnotes.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-23283753302411400992017-05-28T09:19:07.455-07:002017-05-28T09:19:07.455-07:00This feels like the anatomy of a panic attack. The...This feels like the anatomy of a panic attack. The way the lines are snipped and shaped here, and especially the constriction (or is it an expansion in a different direction?) of the words into that sharp shape...really nicely done.Rommyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18343895193475984183noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-14594046916542365172017-05-28T08:08:18.231-07:002017-05-28T08:08:18.231-07:00I love that closing: Breathe...........I love that closing: Breathe...........Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01926508656571639801noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-72621253362116285702017-05-28T07:49:24.455-07:002017-05-28T07:49:24.455-07:00Poor wee thing!Poor wee thing!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-75615433494391366002017-05-28T07:37:37.275-07:002017-05-28T07:37:37.275-07:00Oh! Nicely done...B r e a t h e.....Oh! Nicely done...B r e a t h e.....annell4https://www.blogger.com/profile/07629830133868270690noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-59342019490166494782017-05-28T07:33:16.766-07:002017-05-28T07:33:16.766-07:00so poignant...so poignant...Sumana Royhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17333363799083094084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-75614766248881745012017-05-28T07:32:27.520-07:002017-05-28T07:32:27.520-07:00Stunning words, uniquely presented.Stunning words, uniquely presented.indybevhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05505539407819784525noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-88914640417148972522017-05-28T07:31:57.346-07:002017-05-28T07:31:57.346-07:00Really like how the crack seems quiet and yet dang...Really like how the crack seems quiet and yet dangerous, and how the words merge into the crack. Rob Jacksonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04982759910079119392noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-50405651454380485322017-05-28T07:10:46.163-07:002017-05-28T07:10:46.163-07:00what a poignant poem...metaphor to all..it's s...what a poignant poem...metaphor to all..it's sometimes a teardrop a must for 'crack' to start to heal....blessings!humbirdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00106270909713851811noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-6849562256043309692017-05-28T06:11:14.696-07:002017-05-28T06:11:14.696-07:00The crack as bone and earthly body - the need to b...The crack as bone and earthly body - the need to breathe at any cost...bkmsigned...bkmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-35543020011755776962017-05-28T05:43:02.265-07:002017-05-28T05:43:02.265-07:00I love the atmosphere you have created here.. brea...I love the atmosphere you have created here.. breathing can be hard at timesJae Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11509244123008832611noreply@blogger.com