tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post6217152362860001009..comments2024-03-28T18:04:58.688-07:00Comments on Imagine: To The SeaDr. Pearl Ketover Prilik (PKP)http://www.blogger.com/profile/15506538737806033824noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-59846537708578280572012-05-04T19:45:03.883-07:002012-05-04T19:45:03.883-07:00Hi .... OH MY GOODNESS... Was so busy with trying ...Hi .... OH MY GOODNESS... Was so busy with trying to get poems together for a collection.. a new commitment to submit something somewhere every day in the month of may and realizing I had written almost 200 poems this April for PAD challenge and saved NONE.. (don't ask ... they are now here on a separate page)... that I DID NOT SEE THESE COMMENTS!!!!<br /><br />Oh thank you, thank you, thank you. After an odd couple of days feeling positively 'fried' your beautiful words are like cool water on my mind....<br /><br />So much appreciated :)))))))))))))Dr. Pearl Ketover Prilik (PKP)https://www.blogger.com/profile/15506538737806033824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-12159981724543652712012-05-04T17:02:57.032-07:002012-05-04T17:02:57.032-07:00The salted air...the sea. So good for the soul. I ...The salted air...the sea. So good for the soul. I was lucky to be at a the sea one morning off of a Maui shore...so clear, warm and inviting...Now if I could just breath under water...<br /><br />My contribution can be found here:<br />http://julesgemsandstuff.blogspot.com/2012/04/lackluster-lackey-sunday-whirl-wordle.htmlJuleshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00571987715911379165noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-13809254013665298372012-05-01T19:22:16.715-07:002012-05-01T19:22:16.715-07:00I'm with Flaubert: 'to the sea' just k...I'm with Flaubert: 'to the sea' just keeps drawing the reader farther and farther in...<br /><br /><a href="http://magicalmysticalteacher.wordpress.com/2012/04/30/elusive-music/" rel="nofollow"><b>Elusive Music</b></a>Magical Mystical Teacherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01853272111925075994noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-43725967015692862502012-04-30T20:44:38.899-07:002012-04-30T20:44:38.899-07:00So visually stunning, Pearl. Love the repeating re...So visually stunning, Pearl. Love the repeating refrain and the way you separated the last few lines made it dramatic. Very nice!Hannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10124956200834969600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-65436262572465588132012-04-30T13:04:37.620-07:002012-04-30T13:04:37.620-07:00Lovely as always, Dr. P.Lovely as always, Dr. P.Sara McNultyhttp://purplepeninportland.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-18846952135303784692012-04-29T14:26:34.919-07:002012-04-29T14:26:34.919-07:00Beautiful imagery!Beautiful imagery!daphnepurpushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05337076348490404223noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-48245522910651297702012-04-29T12:51:18.922-07:002012-04-29T12:51:18.922-07:00This is lush, Pearl. I love the refrain "to t...This is lush, Pearl. I love the refrain "to the sea".<br /><br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-71170686768737874352012-04-29T09:43:45.447-07:002012-04-29T09:43:45.447-07:00one usually thinks of the sea as the one with the ...one usually thinks of the sea as the one with the inexorable path, instead of one intent on reaching it. good stuff.Mark Windhamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01662876682127886074noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-91851786544074609602012-04-29T09:11:12.926-07:002012-04-29T09:11:12.926-07:00So beautiful. Especially lovely is "into molt...So beautiful. Especially lovely is "into molten pewter of shimmered sky". Sigh. I accompanied her every footfall.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-56708573554771931822012-04-29T07:15:04.341-07:002012-04-29T07:15:04.341-07:00Your writing is lush with sensation, Pearl. The p...Your writing is lush with sensation, Pearl. The pictures are beautiful, too.brenda whttp://undercaws.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-18154411869503440182012-04-29T06:40:46.653-07:002012-04-29T06:40:46.653-07:00Gorgeous writing! So many splendid images! I loved...Gorgeous writing! So many splendid images! I loved: "her heart hammering her intractable path" and "newly fingered crimsoning dawn rustled flocks of geese rise as one vanished vees into molten pewter."<br />The ending was unexpected!Mariannehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17734900426632493796noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1819558801520044413.post-39217873671212717392012-04-29T06:29:27.539-07:002012-04-29T06:29:27.539-07:00This stanza is gorgeous:
There in the newly finger...This stanza is gorgeous:<br />There in the newly fingered crimsoning dawn <br />rustled flocks of geese rise as one<br />vanished vees into molten pewternanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03445777687088584603noreply@blogger.com